Reviews for Lincoln's ValentinesBy : Skullduggery21 |
I have to say, I'm liking this story. At first, I thought it'd just be a story where Lincoln feeds them chocolates, and then they'd be so overwhelmed by the chocolatey goodness, that they'd reward him with chocolate, Nyotaimori (body sushi) Style. But I'm glad it went in a different direction. I thought the way it was handled was pretty good, and didn't default to bashing or strawmanning. Seemed realistic, but not in an "Oh no, it's another Make it Wit Chu" kind of realism where I question the foundations of life itself. I do find it a sort of hard concept to deal with myself, because to be honest... I don't necessarily see Lisa being the voice of reason. Now don't get me wrong, she's a very intelligent girl, but she's not quite as well-versed in social graces as other sisters. It's why we got episodes like "Friend or Feaux" where she didn't know how to make friends or see the point in them, or "House of Lies" where she didn't see the merit in telling white lies.
But I still liked the way this scene played out, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Formatting sucks! The story itself was beyond amazing! More please!!!
will this ever get continued? dun dun dunn!
Nice read hope to see more
I don't even care that there's nothing lewd. I'm impressed by your word smithing alone.
This is the kind of writing i want to put in my stories. Hope to see more from ya
Really like this story, looking forward to more to see how this will escalate.
Very good fic I hope you update soon, is nice to have some chapters with actual plot
Can't wait to read more nothing naughty yet but next chapter we should be at the naughty incest
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