Reviews for Awkward First Time

BY : Fizzer


  • From AFFModerator on January 02, 2018

    Please correct your disclaimer.

    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom and say you don’t own it.  Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.

    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it.  At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.

    Here's a link to the Terms of Service:  http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php</p>

    This link is to the FAQ about disclaimers, with some examples:  http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560

    We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:  http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php

    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.

    Thank you,

    CL Mustafic, AFF Archive Moderator



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  • From pronker on December 27, 2017

    Very funny ... and very sweet. Good job!



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  • From WritingDude on December 23, 2017

    Well this definitely lived up to its title. I was laughing really hard by the end. There were a few spelling errors, but overall I had fun reading this. Excellent work :D



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  • From Lunarsilver on December 23, 2017

    Bet Anna and Kristoff probably said or thought "what's lube" so if there's a sequel it could be Elsa who teaches them and watches them have sex to make sure there doing it rid not only does Anna and Kristof do better but also like having sex while Elsa watches but Anna or Kristof could ask her if she would like to join them



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