Reviews for A Step at a Time

BY : Cat_Eyes


  • From Mallorie_Shim on December 05, 2017

    Absolutely lovely story so far! I really like how you're able to expand on the characters personality and give them more depth while still maintaining their core character traits. You're also good art keeping the pace of the story interesting but believable. One of my favourite instance of this was Chat telling Marinette that he knew her true identity. You could have dragged it out for more drama and story padding but that wouldn't be authentic to the characters at all, at least in my opinion. 

    Keep up the great work! Always looking forward to updates!



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  • From ShadowSlayer on November 20, 2017

    Loved it. Really well written. Poor kitty. =P I'm sure everything will eventually work out though.



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  • From Blueblur21 on November 02, 2017

    I really enjoy this story. You ring out the character's personalities like I've never seen before. Please write more! 



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  • From AFFModerator on October 27, 2017

    Please correct your disclaimer.

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