Even though the characters don't always hold the essence of who they are all the time this story is very good. The detail is amazing. I would LOVE to see a comic of this!

I do have a revenge stoy in the works. This story is NOT the reveneg story. First I needed Kim's brothers to help her acheve that goal. But they would only help her...for a price. 

The "revenge" will be very humiliating for both Bonnie and Shego.

Btw...the revenge story is 1/2 written. I completed this story (Brorther's Blackmail) a few weeks ago.  Kim's Revenge  will not be posted until next year sometime. I'm thinking February or as late as March. 

Good to hear that the seqel will be up soon.  I didn' expected that her brothers would be involved.  Hope to read it soon.

Thank you for all the reviews. I am planning on writting a "Part 2" to this story that will involve Kim's brothers. They will help Kim get revenge. It's coming soon.

Chris

I would like to see an epilog where Kim is Bonny's sex-slave

Will there be a sequel?

Another amazing chapter, who's the mystery woman, I know all the hot female characters that are or appeared in the show and have a few ideas of who it could be, but I can't wait to find out.

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By the end of the bet will Kim be so lost in pleasure that she has an O face? (eye's rolled up mouth open tongue out) or will Kim ask Bonnie to make another hole so she can get spit roasted and have the new hole be big enough so the dick behind Kim can choose her pussy or ass to fuck, then Kim has that O face after every guy had spit roasted her in the second round. Or the hole behind Kim could be there for Bonnie to get in on the action?

Either way I know the next chapter will be great

Kim is so gonna be a mess being covered in both oil and cum even before the last guy leaves

have to say for the 3 chaps its good looking forward to see what u do in the next chap

This is getting good, will there be video cameras inside Kim's booth so the guys outside waiting there turn can watch Kim go down on the next dick while she's riding the sybian? when the last guy leaves and Bonnie opens the door will she see Kim wearing an O face, eyes rolled up mouth open tongue out and will her hair and chest be plastered in cum?

Will Ron go first since he's the boyfriend?

I think Kim should win so Bonnie can enjoy all the cocks she wants besides Bonnie has already humiliated Kim by having her there in a bikini in public with people watching, but I wouldn't mind seeing both of them lose at least then Bonnie can enjoy her cocks while knowing that Kim feels humiliated for having to do this but maybe secretly wanted to do it and is enjoying herself?