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Reviews for An Incredible Valentine

By : TheEvilFaery
  • From GeorgeGlass on December 23, 2018

    Some of the things I liked: 
    -The "I'm all bulgy" reference to that Simpsons episode where Homer visits the third dimension.
    -That Bob's superhuman toughness makes the cupid-arrow bounce right off his head. And the crazy ricochet afterward was wonderfully cartoonish.
    -"Everything tasted pink for a second."
    -Violet using her forcefields to pull buttons off of Helen's top
    -Violet being invisible, which I suppose helps explain her boldness
    -Violet confessing that she doesn't know what to do after she gets her mom's clothes off.
    -Helen altering the shape of her tongue to more thoroughly eat out her daughter.
    -The hot mother-daughter incest in general.
    -The happy ending, infant abduction and all :-).


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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2018

    Everything was so on point for this I don't even know where to begin!

    The slow sensual buildup was so satisfying when things finally picked up, Helen and Vi felt so unbelievably real and in character; like I could very easily visualize their personalities through the dialogue; which is something I'm not graced to often in smut. :)

    Do you accept commissions by any chance? I'd be more than happy to see another story like this from you.


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  • From Oric13 on November 12, 2017

    Good story, well written.

    Although with Helen Parr involved I was kinda expecting her to use her powers to turn her clit into a dick or something and take Violet's virginity, and even though I'm not usually into futa I was still kinda disappointed that this didn't happen. :p


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  • From ninesenshi on September 09, 2017

    Need more of this.  Well written.  I want to see Helen take Vi's cherry with her tongue.  Needs more chapters!


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  • From vgjunky160 on September 07, 2017

    Big fan, hope to see more like/of this


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