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By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From The_Desert_Dancer on July 23, 2017

    Awesome Chapter here, absolutely unique concept being used. Nice to see Gaz being roughly fucked by a barbarian Dib, and treated like a slut. Keep up the good work! 


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  • From RagingDemon on July 21, 2017

    Alright! Another great Gaz one-shot! I do love how you write Gaz, and this is just delightful~ The sex is great, Dib taking advantage of his barbarian physique, and Gaz loving it, is awesome. Your writing style really is improving. I do have ONE criticism. I just feel that the story ends a bit too quickly. After Gaz and Dib have their fun it's over in less than 10 sentences. I'm not saying make some grand operatic storyline, I am saying maybe have the comdown be just a tad slower. Maybe make them enjoy the afterglow a bit more before Gaz takes off.

    But that's one small nitpick, and I still enjoyed the story greatly! Hope to see more in the future!


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  • From Lunarsilver on July 20, 2017

    All your stories including the Zim one's involving gaz is awesome, maybe gaz can force zim to join them and make him into a barbarian too so gaz can get two of her three holes filled instead of one and Zim has the technology to make there stay in that world for as long as gaz want maybe even permanent because time in the real world is now a game on pause until Gaz, Zim and Dib come back.


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