Reviews for Talon: The son of Zone-Tan

BY : blackthorn2004


  • From Lunarsilver on August 11, 2017

    I like how you used the first Gwen from the original ben 10, I remember seeing a photo of her and kid wonder woman in a sex competition against each other using guys and each other, this could be a separate story where all the girls talon been with are teleported to a world to compete in a sex orgy with guys, who ever wins gets to go home but all the girls fail because there bodies/holes were used so many times that they didn't care or remember how they got there in the first place but all they know now is that they never want to leave.



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  • From Lunarsilver on August 07, 2017

    Awesome especially how zone-tan felt flattered that talon was fapping to her sex tape.



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  • From Lunarsilver on June 17, 2017

    Glad that talon can give her some "comfort" lol ;)



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  • From Lunarsilver on June 02, 2017

    Wow if seeing your parents having sex wasn't aqward enough but hearing what she said during definitely would be just as much, good job.



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  • From Adam on May 30, 2017

    now this i'm going to enjoy



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  • From Lunarsilver on May 28, 2017

    Oh definitely good choice especially if it's Batgirl from Batman tas same with Supergirl from Superman tas, the one time they teamed up in a episode against live wire, poison ivy and harley quinn. the two superheroes seemed like the perfect lesbian couple but they will make a great bisexual couple when they have a threesome with talon



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  • From Lunarsilver on May 28, 2017

    Could April O'Neil from your story be in it.



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