Reviews for Kim and her mommy's Beach Vacation

BY : lilo1013


  • From Lunarsilver on June 21, 2017

    Maybe during the skinny dipping pool scene they show the video camera a fun pool game, Kim and Ann masturbate by having there bodies and chest pressed against each other again while using/rubbing the same pool noodle in between there legs to cum.



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  • From Lunarsilver on June 21, 2017

    The owner of the island is twice the age he display because of an accident that let's him keep his current physical form forever and with the stamina to Outlast any girl or girls no matter how many even all at once thinks they can keep up. Before the accident he was a Master of BDSM to the point where he could tell if a girl is into BDSM and a sub who is looking for a Dom to take them away somewhere she can experience all kinds of pleasures that come with being his sex slave, (including gang bang if that's ok with you) using his skillful use of his fingers, dick and BDSM can make a girl feel so good to the point where she agrees to do anything he wants without hesitation just to keep living as his sex slave forever which he can make any girl he wants just like him, he just needs to cum anywhere in or on they're bodies just once and that's it. Kim, Ann, the cheerleaders and all the attractive female characters in the show are that sub, so he came back early to set up a plan to make all the girls he wants starting with Kim and Ann to make their exsistence disappear so he can turn them into his BDSM sex slaves and live there new lives as his sex slaves on his island forever, but for that to happen he needs them to give up there lives willingly and on camera which for him makes it more fun, especially the faces all the girls make on camera showing that they're broken from pleasure (eye's rolled up mouth open tongue out) he starts with Kim and Ann by watching them both scissoring each other Kim was lying on her right arm and Ann on her left so the chest and pussy were on display for the owner of the island who unknown to them was standing in the doorway, the girls were about to cum but interrupted them then gave them his offer knowing that they couldn't win even if they work together, he revealed his dick 12" long 3" wide. The girls accepted there fate, on the bed while the owner of the island fucked both girls at once, Ann on the bottom with her head hanging upside down over the edge of the bed with Kim on top with there chest pressed against each other wearing broken faces which the camera a few feet away can see. Both girls say they are his sex slaves.

     

    I would've pm this to you if I could on this site but guess it'll in a review, The interaction in story between characters I'm not great at but hope you can use this, take out the parts you don't like, I also had an idea where the owner of the island turn his island to the most secretive untouchable successful brothel I have more detail for that idea but would like to know what you think, my pen name on fanfiction.net is lunar silver



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  • From Lunarsilver on June 12, 2017

    Glad you liked my idea enough to use it my favorite part was when Kim and her mom looked at the camera and took a photo together with their boobs pressed against each other that was my favorite part and I have an idea for the ending of the story if you don't have one already. You can pm me at the fanfiction.net site when I leave the idea in the review after I'm done writing it.



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  • From Victor2K on June 11, 2017

    It's a pretty fine story. Need some work but the premise is quite sexy



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  • From Lunarsilver on June 02, 2017

    Maybe the two feel so sexually bold about being naked around each other that they use their phones to take seductive selfie's and posses, one photo could be the two look at the camera while their boobs are so squashed against each other that their nipples don't show, Ann could've​ brought a video camera with a tripod so they can make a sex tape and round 2 could be having sex while watching the sex tape.



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  • From snake1980 on May 18, 2017

    have to say for the start its good. looking forward to the next update



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  • From tom on May 18, 2017

    nice start



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