All I got to ask is when is the next chapter going to be posted. The anticipation is killing me so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.

Another great chapter!

AO3 stands for Archive of Our Own, and it's a fanfiction site similar to fanfiction.net, but less restrictive. One of the things I like about it is that authors can add their own tags to a story, which readers can use when searching the site. In order to make an account there, you need an invitation code. I can procure one for you if you'd like.

Speaking of fanfiction.net, that's another site where you can post your story. It's a bit more restrictive than AO3, but as far as I can tell it's the major fanfiction site. 

Other sites you could post on include Deviantart and Tumbr.

One great thing about all of these sites, is that you can either add tags to your stories and/or file them under catagories (it depends on the site), which will help expose your writings to more people.

Go ahead and email me if you want that AO3 invitation code, and please let me know what sites you decide to post on, so I can go and favorite/follow/like/bookmark etc.

Maybe Lincoln could make as many tentacles/dicks as he wants so he could have five to use on each sister or sisters that want in like one/pussy one/ass one/mouth two/hands and the rest can be used for to bound his sisters and grope their boobs then Lincoln could be a one man sex machine that can fill and cover them in cum

All I can say after reading the last review is don't let negativity change how you write. Honestly to me , how Lincoln reacted is more realistic. Just the feeling of wanting to despertly protect those you care for no matter what and the fact that this abilities are just appearing. With both of these ideas in mind, what you wrote is the logical reaction of that desire to protect and the inexperience of having all of this power appear at once. As I have said before, huge fan and just wanted to spread my own opinion when I was checking out the site.

Oh, get off it. The latest chapter fails to realize that most 'criminals' are simply people who are trying to provide for their families because they have been pushed to the margins of society.

Lincoln would do well to remember that but for the grace of Fate, he could have been ANY ONE OF THEM and that killing ANYONE when you have the power that you do not have to do that is wrong.

If I had the abilities of Superman, just like him, I would refuse to take another person's life (save if they were putting someone else's life in danger at that very moment and I could not 'save' that person without taking that life).

Here? Lincoln went apeshit for good reasons but he did not have to kill anyone. A few broken arms and legs and those guys would have been down for the count.

First I want to say "Yay" that three new chapters will be coming soon. I can not begin to tell you how much I enjoy this series already,or how many times that I check your page to see if the next chapter has appeared. Second , the plot that you are writing is just amazing , that is acting almost like a drug to my system, I read and I just have to have more to see what is going to happen  next , so congratulations on that. Especially since you do it in a way that I just never see coming , thought after chapter seven , i never expected to see him protecting his sisters like that. That was just a jaw dropping moment for me in this amazing story. Hope to see the next chapter soon. 

Love the story so far! Btw, do you post on any other sites, like AO3?

Wonderfull story,kudos on the way you made every loud house character play a part. I love where this story is going, and how you want to give every girl a turn and leave no one out. can't wait for an update.

I love what you did with the most recent chapter. You're developing the story in an interesting way. To lay your worries to rest, the direction you're going in with this story is not stupid. I actually like it quite a bit. That the chemicals that are reletively harmless to the sisters, almost killed Lincoln. You're giving him basic super powers now which, as long as you continue to write with the same skill level, can only make things even more interesting. I'm also eager to learn what secrets his sisters have been keeping from him. I impatiently await the next chapter, keep up the good work.

Great chapter can't wait to read more of Leni I can see Leni and Lori double teaming lincoln multiple times after their turns are done and the others as well

Maybe Lincoln should collect panties from the last day with each sister

I just have to say that the plot in this story is just amazing, I loved the latest chapter even without the sex that has occupied the other chapters. Makes me curious about what exactly Lisa has been planning for months and I am eagerly awaiting for further chapters. On a side note , your style of writing is exactly what I am looking for in erotic stories, sex with enough of a plot so it doesn't get old and stale. I know even when this story ends, I will be checking back every day for the next story you write, just as i check back every day for a new chapter of this story.

Absolutely fantastic story so far. I've never seen the show but your work has single=handedly made me want to check it out in the near future. There is so much to praise about this, the dialogue you come up between the characters is really some of the best Ive ever seen in slash fiction. The really in-depth details is just fantastic and really puts you in the scene. The kinks and scenarios youve made so far are really unique and creative and that is just for the seemingly most 'normal' girl of the bunch, it makes me extremely excited to see what kind of wacky shenanigans you come up for the more eccentric...and dare i say younger sisters. Keep up the great work!

A very well done ending of Dom and Sub to Lori's turn

Holy crap! It's great that you'll include them all, If chapter 6 had that that much going into her, I can't wait to see what's in store for Lola and Lana.