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Reviews for Her Relationship

By : SamuelSadi
  • From ANON - on June 30, 2016
    Fantastic work you've done. Please write more. I must experience the rest of their story from your pen.
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  • From Belfry on October 08, 2015
    Glad to see it back up! Chapter 11 is EXCELLENT! Keep the story going!
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  • From Belfry on June 25, 2015
    Did someone hack my computer and read the rest of my outline for my AFF, "Crossed Lines"?

    JUST KIDDING!

    Seriously, your first story posted is done very well (I used to be a teacher), the pacing is good, surprises are really surprises and I must agree with Ifritking1 that you have done a magnificent job explaining the 'joy of having a baby'.

    I was a little surprised at Vicky's (Yes, that is how it is spelled in every FOP website I have seen. I made the same mistake in my AFF--I spelled her name Sissi at first instead of Sissy) first meeting Bella. A surprising, but effective, way to make a friend.

    I can understand that sex with your lover can get eventually get boring. Like relationships, it must evolve. ME and my girlfriend's changed ours when we added anal to our repertoire. Her choice.

    Everyone has their own style of writing and composing. Your story is very good. Please continue; I'm looking forward to your next posting!
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  • From Ifritking1 on June 24, 2015
    Finally! A romance/pregnancy story done right! I mean, in all real honesty, there are only 2 stories I've read that comes close, one is an Anko/Naruto story where she surprises him with her pregnancy after he rescues her from the Akatsuki, the other is where naruto becomes sixth hokage, dates anko, and eventually ends up in a relationship with both her and kurenai yuuhi. Most preg stories are crap, but this, this is one story done right! I absolutely dislike the fact that a lot of other preg stories either have A: the lady already pregnant or B: it skips over the details like the cravings, mood swings, and most importantly, fainting/getting sick at the sight of blood. I like stories like this, mainly because it didn't skip the pregnancy, not like other stories do, where all they write is 'it was hell, but nine or so months later, the baby was born', what like nothing else happened, like arguments, fights, insecurities, or even, god forbid, romance? Pfffft. Get real, people. If this author doesn't mind doing review requests, please write an Avatar: the last airbender one with Aang being with Suki aka the kyoshi island girl. I really like that pairing. Please, the only Aang/Suki pairing story out there is by SubjectDeltaBubz, and he? Still hasn't written a sequel for it! Ok, I'm gonna stop now, cos if I don't, I'm gonna start ranting. So, bye.
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