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Reviews for Star vs. The Forces of Gustav's Meat

By : MichaelATownshed
  • From SparkleSunshine on May 16, 2020

    Would love to see another Star story out of this writter. 


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  • From Ms.Sunshine372 on May 09, 2020

    Great Story there should be a part 2!


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  • From Daga on May 02, 2020

    Love this story its really refreshing to see some star smut that isnt just with marco. Would love to see another chapter or another Star story from you!


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  • From Hellfire864 on June 11, 2018

    Best SVTFOE smut I’ve ever found. Fucking impressive! Please make more of this with Star, I’ll pay you!! Do you have any other fanfics that you’ve published? I need to read them! 


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  • From SWK on May 07, 2015
    Here... I'm going to be the party popper... I... why? I mean, yeah, Star is a quite impulsive girl, yeah. But, she obviously despised Gustav. Why would she jump from downright dislike, to jumping his bones? I know what you tried to do there... really. But It doesn't make sense...

    Yeah, it's a What's if. But... As I saw in the character, I thought that she would have at least Dildoed his ass until he bleed to teach him a lesson of who *owns* that family. As they were clearly trying to claim dominance over them, and who get's the attention of the Diaz.

    Maybe this work didn't well, worked with me because I'm so far inclining myself to a Star/Marco. Especially as they're growing closer with each new chapter, as Marco grows bolder while Star is getting more... calmer than before.

    Also, in the new chapter I was surprised of how many... sex innuendo was there between the Diaz... who didn't even seemed to care that Star was there to see them, much less their son. Which does indeed open a road for many things between Marco and Star... or a really messy Incest story, which might also give another meaning to the Diaz willingness to receive teenagers from all over the world without even a protest.

    In the end, now that I think about it... maybe Star despite her rambunctious personality and craziness that she downright sweats by just existing, is in fact the element that would bring paradoxically, some semblance of "Normalcy" to his life. As he apparently, wasn't even surprised to catch his parents in such compromising situations.

    Now I'm rambling... Sorry to rain on your parade. It was a certainly good smut, but story wise... it didn't make that much sense to me.
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  • From ANON - Edward on April 22, 2015
    Finally, a Star vs the Forces of Evil story!

    This was great, too bad Marco did not join the fun.

    Plues the humor in Star's lines was pretty funny.
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