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By : GeorgeGlass
  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 07, 2015
    Geeze, three teaser chapters in a row. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were teasing the hell out of us on purpose. It was very well done however, as always, and I totally agree with Jenny, that Stacy should video and audio record her first complete time with her lovers, for her own (and Jeremy and Candace's) personal use.
    Please update soon.
    Joma
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  • From SWK on May 07, 2015
    Oh man, I got a good laught with this interlude, especially as I knew that it would end like that between them... though, I liked once again that they didn't ended up having "phone-sex". As it would have been quite cliché... and it would also add a possible fourth person to this trio.

    Laughed out loud with the solar powered dildo... Also, if this is the first interlude, would that mean that there's going to be others? I'm still wondering if you're going to put a antagonist on this story, cof-Suzie-cof... There's simply no chance that the girl wouldn't notice that Jeremy is giving her less attention than before now that he haves *two* girlfriends instead of one.


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  • From SWK on May 07, 2015
    Well, that ascended quickly, I guess that the sexual tension is simply quite too much for them to deal with. Good job on including all of them on the mix, it's a quite well done scene, steamy too.

    I do wonder if Stacy will soon discover that Suzie is a control freak when Jeremy is involved?

    Also, I'm quite delighted that they show some restraint on the issue, Candance effectively doesn't have any luck, and she had been caught, many times unfairly. So the fact that they're still willing to be together but on a more secure place was a satisfactory change to what I expected to happen. As it goes more with the characters personalities that downright jumping at sex.

    I guess that Phineas and other characters wouldn't be used on this story, for it would be quite convenient for Candance to ask for help, which they would gladly offer. THough, I don't see Candance approaching her brothers on the issue, especially as she doesn't want anyone at the moment to know about it.

    Also, having them help the trio would take away the tension of being discovered that's always there, just because they aren't Phineas & Ferb.
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  • From SWK on May 07, 2015
    Oh, so that's how you're going to take it... I guess that it could be taken that way, that they had been supressing a mutual attraction toward each another simply because they both loved Candance way to much to hurt her like that.

    And while Candance plan sounds complicated, it isn't. It's quite simple, what isn't simple is how to hide it from the society and their friends, which is way more harder than anything else. Though, the Tri-State Area seems pretty open minded, they had to be to let children do what they do on that place without that much of a concern.

    Lynda on the other hand... well, she's the one that worries me the most. While she's normally a great mother, she might be a problem in the future... but then, she had been show to be quite open minded and might give us a surprise there.


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  • From SWK on May 07, 2015
    Finally, I have been expecting a story focused on this three for quite a long time, and the fact that *you* of all people decided to made one make this even better. The series had a lot of moments between Candance and Stacy, sometimes even more than Candance and Jeremy (Until their pair up, then Stacy is downright tossed aside, such a thing being even explored on a later episode).

    I'm curious as to how will you treat the fact that Stacy and Jeremy just barely interact, in fact at some points its almost perceptible that they just tolerate the other just because the know Candance.
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  • From ANON - some guy on May 03, 2015
    You do great work with the characters, especially Candice. Your stories feel like they would be an actual episode if the writers decided to go TV-MA.
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  • From TheallmightyUltimix on May 02, 2015
    You magnificent bastard, that's the second time you've teased us for a sex scene! You realize that now you have to make the actual sex scene ten times more hot because of that, right?
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  • From Belfry on May 02, 2015
    Excellent! Your latest chapter showed perfectly the feelings of the main three characters. Lonely and heartbroken are two things that change people. I hope that if they do go further, then they show their feelings openly and honestly. That's the only way to make their tri-relationship work and last over time.
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 02, 2015
    Well, you should start posting a new warning with your stories. "Do not read in public, lest you suffer embarrassing arousal." This chapter was even better than the last, and the crazy thing is that Candace telling the truth instead of keeping a secret seems like the kind of thing that actually would work on the show. As always, keep up the amazing work, and update soon :-)
    Joma
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on April 30, 2015
    Wait, one of Candace's plans actually worked? Not just worked, but worked in the most wonderful way possible? Call the military! Call the National Guard! Cats and dogs living together! Mass Hysteria!!
    But seriously, this chapter couldn't have been more wonderfully crafted, sexy, and downright teasing if it wanted to be. I think I'm safe in saying I wasn't the only one wishing Candace had gone with the "rip their clothing and go hog wild" thought that she had ;-)
    Seriously can't wait for your next installment man :-)
    Joma
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  • From ANON - harem lover 26 on April 25, 2015
    Update soon
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on April 20, 2015
    I'm glad to see this story finally seeing the light of day! Its a little on the shorter side, but I'm assuming you are going to make up for that later. Also, really glad to see you including Stacy, as she doesn't get nearly as much love from the fan community as she deserves. Great to be reading something new from you, and I can't wait for your next update :)
    Joma
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