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Reviews for Danville, We Have a Problem

By : GeorgeGlass
  • From Aysha on December 13, 2013
    Very good plot development, next chapter looks like a lot of fun, please post soon.
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on December 07, 2013
    Somehow, you even manage to make sexless, filler chapters relevant to the story. And I really can't wait to see where you go with phineas and isabella. Update soon!
    JMAHWK
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  • From Aysha on December 01, 2013
    I'm glad you brought this storyline back and I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on November 30, 2013
    Well damn. Isn't that always the way in a space thriller, for absolutely EVERYTHING to go wrong at once. First Isabella and Phineas having their mini-fight, then the space station becoming a floating hunk of metallic Swiss cheese. And on top of it all, the other four couples are now going to not only be freaking out, but horny as their lives are now in very real danger. Im serious, as much as im enjoying this story, if someone dies, it will be a very sad time.
    Still, can't wait for your next chapter!
    JMAHWK
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on November 23, 2013
    Wow. Just WOW. Perfect sequel, and definitely staying in character. Phineas, despite coming to the realization of his love for Isabella, is still very very thick when it comes to the romantic needs and wants of his new girlfriend. This chapter gave me several honest laugh out louds, which is becoming more and more rare as of late, and I applaud you for that. But you also took it one step farther and showed that although they are together, Isabella isn't above getting a little mad at Phineas' lack of knowledge when it comes to romance and her desires. On a more serious note, your description for this one did put me off a bit, in that I know you are willing to explore the themes of death from Ferb's back story in Sweet Dreams, but now I'm a little afraid that not all of our sex-tranaughts will be returning to Danville alive. Gravity already showed enough death in space man, I really hope you don't go extending that to the characters of one of my favorite cartoons.
    But despite all that, this story is already shaping up to be EPIC. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Jomahawk
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