Click Here!

Reviews for The Fetish

By : unicornlord
  • From ANON - RAW19 on January 07, 2015
    Sexy and sweet, this. Most excellent.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Zypher on February 24, 2014
    Is this still going on? It hasn't been updated in a while now and I am looking forward to seeing the reaction of what appears to be Sweety Belle when she sees what Rarity is doing
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lord Sergal on November 14, 2013
    Discord and Pinkie would be a good match with their crazy personalities and all. Plus, Discord could mess with the spell and give her chocolate breast milk.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - bill on November 10, 2013
    this is awesome, please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From Daneasaur on June 22, 2013
    Just read chapter 5.
    It was incredibly sweet and once again, you nailed the characters spot on.

    I also agree that at least postponing the sex is a good move and does not detract from the quality of the story.

    I suggest you proofread a little more before posting to work on grammar and accidental word placement as, for a momenr, it seemed that twilight and spike had been into S&M, though I caught the typo.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ron on June 20, 2013
    I loved it and Spike should be the one to take her virginity from Rarity and be her boyfriend and lover because nobody treats her better then hem please let them get together and date each other as boyfriend and girlfriend I'd love that so much I can't wait to see what happens next between them and what happens next
    Report Review

  • From Bennetnelson on June 18, 2013
    Well... What can I say. You had my curiosity now you have my attention.
    See this is ingenious if that was really Twilight looking... A two toned purple hairs FILLY! Key word there. If it is Twilight this brings important questions, how will she react to this, for one Rarity had let Spike take from her breast; that my have been the point, but the implications that would have are astronomical now that Spike has admitted that Rarity tastes better. See? I've thought of Twilight as a yandere in this fic, evidence supports my claim, she will wonder what if Spike likes Rarity's milk too much? It's already implied here that Rarity would put out more for Spike, if he so asked, so Twilight would feel threatened add to the fact Twilights OCD issues and the close relationship Twilight and Spike have, and you have a powder keg with a lit fuse. Racking my brain here to think of another option, maybe Sweetiee hell but she doesn't have a purple mane.
    Really trying to enjoy this story, I'm so desperately trying to enjoy this story but I can't. When I get into it you had little mistakes in It that drive me up the proverbial wall. Like having her in place of he, starting off an idea and quickly changing it mid sentence. These are why proofreaders are important I'm 56% sure any person here would love to proofread for you. I sure as hell want to, so take advantage of that fact and get a necessary second opinion.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Daneasaur on May 10, 2013
    Setup chapter? I highly enjoyed it and feel proper setup is needed for a propper story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bennet001 on April 20, 2013
    Somehow I can't help but feel that Twilight is yandere in a sense. Here she is, already proposed a rather promiscuous opertunity, to protect her and Spike's relationship. Going to extreme lengths to save his reputation while paying little to her own or those around her, seen here by her manipulating Rarity rather skillfully to take in Spike, even knowing his... Disposition, as it were. While I see that this story is going great, yeah great, I cannot help but fathom.
    If Twilight would go so far simply to please Spike, what would she do if Spike decided to leave her for someone else? People emotions changed in stories rather drastically and usually you should draw a lot from nothing. Here singles clues are given that Rairty is rather excited by the prospect of Spike's disposition, make you wonder, well not you as the author, but me as a reader.
    Report Review

  • From TigroSpottystripes on March 18, 2013
    Somthing i'm missing a bit is how their bodies are reacting. I mean, does it just feel good in a pure tactile way (like say, a massage), or are they actually getting aroused by it? And did Big Mac pitch a tent or was he able to focus on just the drinking without actually thinking about what he was drinking it from?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sky on March 15, 2013
    I love this story. Incest is always quite an amusing shot and playing on the closer characters from the show is always a good move. What makes me a might curious is, what form do you have them in? Hands have come up at least once so far, so I'm wondering if maybe you're writing them as human. Because ponies don't have hands.

    Looking forward to more chapters, and thanks for writing it, even if this fetish isn't your thing.
    Report Review

  • From Daneasaur on March 15, 2013
    Having just finished chapter 3, I'm fond of another chapter between AJ and Mac.

    I'm also ok with the lack of sex thus far as the soft tension is enough to keep me reading.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ron on March 05, 2013
    I was thinking that like rainbow dash so applejack with Apple Bloom and Rarity with Sweetie Belle would make the best pars to me please make it it like this please
    Report Review

  • From Bennetnelson on March 04, 2013
    Well here is a surprise! I find this gem on my trolling of the Internet, I'm incredibly lucky! This is touching in a way, the first chapter was the most touching after the review I'm going to read it again, and maybe just one more time. If you want my vote Spike should get them all!! Nah that's cliched, here's how it goes down, Spike gets Rarity, Twilight, and Applejack. Pinkie will probably get the twins. Obviously Rainbow dash has scoots, as for Fluttershy I'm stumped, really I wanted Spike but I think three is enough.
    Report Review

  • From NAnderson on March 02, 2013
    I started reading this thinking it would be complete crack and only worth a laugh or two... After reading it I'm almost ashamed to say that I really enjoyed it lol. It was on the sweet side and more of an intimate thing then a fetish thing reading it. So I have to say, nice job.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!