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Reviews for Transformers Prime The Truth Revealed

By : Aysha
  • From norri on November 07, 2012
    hope u add more soon
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  • From GuardianofAzarath on November 03, 2012
    This is a very interesting story, I'm really liking it so far (I'm also a die-hard Jack/Arcee shipper, although the latest episode did not look good for us Jack/Arcee shippers, then again, didn't look good for the bots either by the end)

    I hope you continue soon, and I can't wait to see June's reaction to the truth :D
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  • From Scourgelover on October 29, 2012
    while this story does lose a bit with sentence structure issues and spelling, the overall plot has me hooked and I am anxious to see how this turns out.
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  • From ANON - Daneasaur on October 24, 2012
    Chapter 2 review:

    This was also very fun and had just the right amount of tension to keep it exciting, even without any actual sex scenes. Just a few spelling and grammar errors which were easily overlooked.

    Ideas for chapter 3: Jack breaks it to his mother and there is tension again, but someone (perhaps Ratchet) brings up the fact that they are possibly the same species, only different size and base, as both worlds were created by Unicron's body.
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  • From norri on October 23, 2012
    still very good
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on October 22, 2012
    Another groovy chapter, I'm rather enjoying the story but man do I ever wanna kick your rear for ending on a cliffhanger again!

    Would be interesting to see how Wheeljack reacts to the news if you find a way to work him into the story. Also might be something to get one of the other fembots into the story from the older series. Like Elita-1 one however her name was written.
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  • From fenrir on October 22, 2012
    A great chapter overall. I would like to see his mom's reaction in the next chapter. Also i found their reactions close to the show. when the kid is born i would like to see what megs would do when he finds out. Also the child could be like Sari from transformers animated.
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  • From KaelHyun on October 22, 2012
    Why you hateing on Miko? Miko is the same age as Jack! just because she's more excitable about the Bots doesnt mean she's a Little Girl.
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  • From ANON - Paladin on October 22, 2012
    One thing I want to point out, Miko's 15... Rafe is the 12 year-old.
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on October 19, 2012
    Love the story so far but I soooooo hate you for ending on a cliffhanger.

    Really want to see the next part soon.
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  • From ANON - Daneasaur on October 18, 2012
    Oh yes, sorry, forgot to leave a suggestion.

    I think you've captured the personalities of the entire cast perfectly. I suggest that Jack and Arcee can have some rough times but are never unfaithful to each other.

    An amusing idea WOULD be to punish Arachnid would be to have her in absurd restraints and forced to birth more bots as payment for killing Cliffjumper and Tailgate. This is, of course, after Jack and Arcee's baby is born and a small recap on how humans, like the bots, were born of Unicron (which is true to the prime canon as Earth was formed around the spark of unicron whereas cybertron was sorta built on his body... complicated).
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  • From ANON - skeletor22 on October 15, 2012
    I really love where this story is going. I would have never thought Arcee would turn into such a nympho and Jacks sudden realizations are simply classic. kinda wish there was a bit more June dialogue and interactions. but other than that great story keep up please
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  • From Daneasaur on October 15, 2012
    This is simply AMAZING! I have been waiting for a sweet romantic extension between Jack and Arcee and this was everything and more. PLEASE continue this!
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  • From norri on October 14, 2012
    i enjoyed the story very much
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  • From ANON - lee on October 13, 2012
    cool cant wait for more keep up the good work
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