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Reviews for Paying a Debt

By : DarthValgaav
  • From ANON - pie on January 27, 2016
    This story is fantastic, well written, devoid of spelling and grammatical error. Without spoiling I now consider the final two chapters of this story canon, it is a back story worthy of publication by Hasbro.

    A definite must
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  • From ANON - DJDelt4 on April 08, 2015
    that was/is a great head cannon about the origins of nightmare night and it does fits into the show aspect. as for the rest of the story so far it is really good to fit into the story of the story of mlp so far perfectly as well hopefully you will continue it I am curious about Hunter and twilight life as well as there parents. are twilight parents ones who want to keep there gens pure as well or will they be ok with it. as for hunters dad well I will first like to see what the female Pegasus will say or will Hunter already have asked twilight to marry him
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  • From ANON - fallenwolfe on December 05, 2013
    Wow, so many feels, i hope to see more of your work, the only thing i can hit on are the repetitive spelling errors but i really enjoyed reading, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2013
    soo im wonerin if you will put the "twilight the alpony" in there?
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  • From coldfang66 on February 20, 2013
    I really can't think of anything to say about how great this story is. Luna's back-story was amazing, I hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Akai on January 29, 2013
    Wow..The last bit about Luna was just amazing. It was a wonderful story and would be a good fic on its own though I'm sure you have reasons for putting it in this.
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  • From ANON - superlink on January 12, 2013
    great work partner ah really liked lunas back story more than how it happend in the show great sex scenes too cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work sugarcube
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  • From ANON - superlink on December 02, 2012
    great work partner the sex scenes were amazing and the story keeps gettin better and ya'll are really getting the hang of the southern talk looking forward to reading the next chapter keep up the great work sugarcube
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  • From ANON - Bren on October 12, 2012
    I could go for some hardcore....turning a mare into my personal toilet...wait did I write that down, err I meant to say that can't wait for the next chapter and I hope Big mac gets a nice hoof up his ass
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  • From ANON - superlink on October 11, 2012
    great work partner on another touching chapter sugarcube your southern talk has also improved still needs just a mite more work also there were some small spelling errors anyway keep up the great work sugarcube
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  • From Bennetnelson on October 07, 2012
    Pretty good for the first chapter, it was nice that twilight got her first taken so gently, but the story seemed to go a little too fast paced try to give more details of the moment, besides that excellent work!!
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  • From ANON - superlink on October 04, 2012
    howdy partner i have an idea for how to put luna in the story ya'll should have her go because she has been on the moon for 1000 years and probably has not gotten layed since then and that she heard about the place from somepony anyway i thought i would share my idea anyway keep up the good work sugarcube
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  • From ANON - superlink on September 30, 2012
    great work on another amazing chapter sugarcube do ya'll think you can pair applejack and rarity together also the southern talk needs a mite more work partner anyways keep up the good work sugarcube
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  • From ANON - Nikkie on September 30, 2012
    Lol the title says it all in chapter three. I didn't expect rainbow dash there.
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  • From ANON - Magus Neon on September 26, 2012
    Excellent Story. No huge grammer or spelling mistakes. I look forward to your next update.
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