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By : Jehuty-Prime
  • From ANON - Ultimate10 on January 02, 2013
    Glad to see you are back up & running. I know it's difficult righting on a site where there are not too many visitors. But you can easily go back to FanFic & tell everybody on ur old profile where your new home is. I hope you update soon or sometime in the future. Keep up the good work Auumaan!!
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  • From ANON - Mazuse on January 01, 2013
    I dunno about adding versions of Sari and Lori, it may make things a little convoluted. I would say just stick to Prime characters, that way you could keep focus on what you've got and even make the sex scenes more heated and raunchy. As for what the story is now, I think you have a great thing going, you should keep up with the deep and tender loving moments of the story, and it wouldn't hurt to maybe go into more detail of the love scenes. A personal wish is that you add alot more June and Arcee moments in the future, hell you could make the whole story focus on those two and Jack only and I'd be perfectly okay with that.

    Any keep up the good work and update real soon plz!
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  • From KaelHyun on October 22, 2012
    Please make more of this as it has to be the best Transformers Prime Fic I've read.
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  • From ANON - Budly on October 08, 2012
    You do find a good balance between tenderness and smut that's for sure, you could probably go further too and things would be fine. Not bad hope there is a update soon, and can't wait for the chapter when June "teams" up with arcee.
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  • From ANON - James on October 02, 2012
    I love the first chapter it was great. Here is a name for Sierra's friend Natalie.
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  • From Shinzochi on September 22, 2012
    AWESOME story you are VERY VERY creative, i am looking forward to reading more chapters of it
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  • From supernova222 on September 08, 2012
    love the fic man, just love it, cant wait for more like with sierra's freind. and i deffinatlt want some more fooling around with june and sierra. keep up the ggod work. you should check out the jack/miko fic i wrote sometime :)
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  • From KaelHyun on September 06, 2012
    Thank you, thank you, thank YOU! I have been waiting for some TFP Het and its Nice to see you started with JackxMiko (My OTP) I honestly hope to read much more of this soon
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  • From GuardianofAzarath on September 04, 2012
    Hey dude! :)

    Glad to see the original story back online (I had to change my username too, it wasn't accepting my old one (Guardian of Azarath, the one I use on FF.net), so I went with TheLoneOne. (like on sofurry), now that you're free to continue this fic without harrassment or danger of deletion, it'll be interesting to see where it goes (I'm still going to work on and post the rewrite to Sofurry if that's ok with you, It's actually proving very popular, it's already got 5 5/5 ratings for the first two chapters alone :D).

    As soon as i figure out how, i'll subscribe to your stories :)

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Dirtonimon on September 02, 2012
    Could you add Akiba Prime to the harem?
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  • From Ryvius on September 02, 2012
    Very entertaining so far, my favorite chapters have been ch.s 3 and 4 with June and Arcee.

    I think you've gotten a pretty good balance between the emotional romance stuff & the lemons.

    Really like Arcee's human form.

    As for suggestions, hmmm, the only thing I really want to see at the moment is a threesome between Jack, June, and Arcee.

    Really suck's you got taken down from fanfiction, I'm still very disappointed with them over the whole lemon witch hunt thing.

    Excellent work, keep it up!
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on September 01, 2012
    I rather like this story so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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