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Reviews for Johnny Nexdor

By : Del
  • From reves_damour on June 17, 2012
    A nice story. The plot was nice, and I understood what was going on even though I've never seen the show before. I'd love to see that second chapter you're working on.

    To improve it, I would recommend working on the grammar, making your usage of nouns and pronouns clearer (I'm not always sure what the pronouns refer too), and using more commas.
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  • From RandomRedneck on June 10, 2012
    Hey man, you got it wrong. Gillian is Dark Vegan's daughter. You're thinking of GIL, not Gillian.
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