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Reviews for Avatar: The Last Airbender - The Lost Script Pages

By : Kataangfanficer
  • From bigherb81 on May 03, 2013
    Wow short and sweet, well shorter. Kudos to Aang on his air bending flash!
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  • From bigherb81 on April 28, 2013
    Glad to see you back at it always enjoy the eclectic sexual preferences that you seem to give the characters. Keeps things interesting and makes it a good read. Gotta say that dream was a definite prime example of that. Can't wait to see what you do when Toph joins the group.
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  • From bigherb81 on January 02, 2013
    Man sucks for Jet that he didn't get a chance at another time. And I know that a teenage boy can't be responsible for what his body does but that is your sister. At least try for some romance. Great job on both chapters loved the Jet one good thing it wasn't a dream though I at least thought he would have gotten a handy j.
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  • From bigherb81 on September 22, 2012
    Geez who's gonna be the next victim of the fondle monster known as Zuko? I mean first Aang then Katara, those hormones are leaving no captive safe from those idle hands of his. Enjoyed this one even though uncle Iroh ruined the moment. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From bigherb81 on July 10, 2012
    Nice I gotta say if I was in Aang's position I would have definitely done the same thing I mean how often do you get the object of your desire as spank material to sit right there for you.
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  • From bigherb81 on June 05, 2012
    Awesome job on that one loved how you got momo involved. Oh and nice use of nuts.
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  • From MistressCat on June 04, 2012
    Hmm, Not bad. Quite a fantasy Kaatara has. And who knew Haru was so well built. Another nice chapter cut from the show.
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  • From ANON - Harry on June 03, 2012
    This is an interesting concept
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  • From ANON - MistressCat on June 03, 2012
    Wow. This was a fun story. You did a pretty good Job. I think I kind of like the script format it is very different. I also think this is somewhat realistic. I can see Aang,being a normal 11-14 year old having to deal with awkward erections. I like how he doesn't freak out. He just deals with it. And I loved king Bumi. I can see the mad king doing that to test loyalty... And to see breasts. Over all good work.
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  • From bigherb81 on June 01, 2012
    Great job on the latest installment. You know for some reason I always seem to forget about this episode and jump straight to the jet one. I think I may be forgetting another episode still. Yea the one about the prison and the earth benders that Katara inspired. Looking forward to what you do with those ones. I'm a Katara Aang fan, but if it's good I won't complain about other pairings.
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  • From SweetPurebloodAngel on May 20, 2012
    Hmm, you could add another Zuko/Aang scene. A more explicit one. It could take place while Zuko and Aang get stuck in an old temple (at the time when Zuko was teaching Aang how to firebend). PRETTY PLEASE!!!! o(.^o^.)o
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  • From SweetPurebloodAngel on May 20, 2012
    Chapter 3: Loved this scene. It could so have happened. o(.^o^.)o
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  • From bigherb81 on May 10, 2012
    Really dug this chapter especially the air nomad female didnt see too many during the series. Looking forward to what you got planned next.
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  • From ninesenshi on May 08, 2012
    Chap 3, ack! Please give warning when there is Yaoi ahead.
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  • From bigherb81 on May 07, 2012
    Hey never be afraid to go outside the norms sometimes a little weirdness is good mix up to the tedium.
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