Hmm, you could add another Zuko/Aang scene. A more explicit one. It could take place while Zuko and Aang get stuck in an old temple (at the time when Zuko was teaching Aang how to firebend). PRETTY PLEASE!!!! o(.^o^.)o
Great job on the latest installment. You know for some reason I always seem to forget about this episode and jump straight to the jet one. I think I may be forgetting another episode still. Yea the one about the prison and the earth benders that Katara inspired. Looking forward to what you do with those ones. I'm a Katara Aang fan, but if it's good I won't complain about other pairings.
Wow. This was a fun story. You did a pretty good Job. I think I kind of like the script format it is very different. I also think this is somewhat realistic. I can see Aang,being a normal 11-14 year old having to deal with awkward erections. I like how he doesn't freak out. He just deals with it. And I loved king Bumi. I can see the mad king doing that to test loyalty... And to see breasts. Over all good work.
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