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Reviews for Luna Nos Custodit

By : Tsuguri
  • From Daneasaur on June 28, 2014
    Read chapter 13, glad to see you've not given up.

    I'm pleased by your writing quality still being intact and I'm fully aware of the concept of writers block.

    Glad I am helping by letting you know I'm here and waiting.
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  • From ANON - icarus on April 13, 2014
    please still be writing the story i gave it praise upon praises and the visions in my minds eye are vivid and would break my heart should they never come to the end of this epic tale
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  • From ANON - Pocket Pony on November 13, 2013
    Oh, man...I just found this story today and read all the way through. I'm not much of a fan of grimdark/war fics, but this one is really good. This story has literally left my stomach in knots, just wondering what's going to happen next keeps me reading. That's the mark of a truly well written story! Just a few forgivable grammar mistakes, and it would have been better if you gave each character dialogue its own separate line, but those are paltry complaints compared to the praise I have for this. Please, please, please! Post the next chapter soon! I can't take these feels for much longer, I need closure!
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  • From Daneasaur on August 02, 2013
    Chapter 12 review.

    Again, such a thrilling chapter!

    Characterization is spot on and keeps me immersed.

    Aside from a few minor spelling/grammar errors, you are doing great!
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  • From ANON - superlink on July 31, 2013
    great work partner another amazing chapter,your chapters are always worth the wait because they are always very good.looking forward to the next chapter its going to be very exiting, can't wait to see when twilight will recover. keep up the great work sugarcube.
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  • From Daneasaur on April 14, 2013
    Just read chapter 11 and thank you for the shout out!

    I am VERY pleased with how it's progressing, grammar and spelling is more fine tuned and is just a very enthralling story.

    Further proof that a story need not "smut" to keep it's audience entertained.
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  • From ANON - superlink on March 25, 2013
    it's good to hear from you partner its been awhile great work on another awesome chapter sugarcube, when ya'll get a bad case of writers block it's best to take a break and relax before you continue. Anyway great work again partner keep up the great work sugarcube can't wait for another amazing chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sky on March 24, 2013
    Yay! I'm glad to see a new chapter to this incredible story. This chapter was awesome too. Sadly that's all I can really say, and looking forward to the next chapter.
    By the by. Do you also post on Equestria Daily, or FIMFiction? Might be a good place to go if you want more readers.
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  • From Daneasaur on March 05, 2013
    This was done fantastically and I find myself in a hurry to read each chapter. You capture the personalities wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - Filmaker001 on February 19, 2013
    I kinda stumbled upon this story during a 'search' and I find it very interesting, a page turner, if it had pages. I came in around chapter 8 and have enjoyed each new one as it was put up. I sincerely hope you finish it. So many good stories seem to just sit there after a while. I know it's not easy to write stories, I've tried myself and I usually wind up with a jigsaw puzzle, pieces here and there. But I keep trying. I hope you will too.
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  • From ANON - superlink on September 30, 2012
    great work on another great chapter sugarcube ah'm glad to hear that the crusaders are back to normal its ah great relief that twilight is okay anyways ah cant wait for another action packed chapter so keep up the good work sugarcube
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  • From ANON - superlink on August 02, 2012
    howdy partner good to here from ya,ll great work on this story sugarcube its great that the crusaders recovered but sad they were possessed by nightmare moon great story ah cant wait to see what happens next keep up the good work partner cant wait for next chapter its gonna be awsome
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  • From goldlink on July 03, 2012
    howdy partner its been ah'while since yer last story but it was worth the wait the story just keeps gettn better n better ah liked that illusion spell ya'll used very nice ah cant wait to see what rarity will do anyway keep up the good work sugarcube ah cant wait for the next story p.s. there was a slight spelling error in the seventh chapter
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  • From goldlink on May 27, 2012
    Howdy partner great work on another great chapter its good to here the crusaders might pull through, the story is coming together nicely anyway keep up the good work sugar cube
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  • From goldlink on May 23, 2012
    howdy partner sorry i didnt review the prievios chapter didnt have access to a computer sorry sugar cube anyway theses here recent storys were great its sad what happend to the cutie mark crusaders though, anyway im really loving this here plot keep up the good work sugar cube im looking forward to more chapters see ya partner
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