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Reviews for My Absolute Mostest Horriblest Day EVER!

By : FairySlayer
  • From ANON - Black-death Viper on September 13, 2015
    That last couple sentences made me cry. This is the third fanfiction out of hundreds to have made me cry. Close to 50 of those fanfiction were sadfics/bittersweets.
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  • From Tomcat on October 19, 2011
    A bit dark, but it was good with Luna showing her true colors in her bid to take over Equestria through Pinkie Pie's eyes. You got her randomness perfectly. And it's great seeing Spike become the hero here. Good work!
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  • From dilguvaqmv on April 15, 2011
    I totally read the entire thing in Pinkie Pie's voice.

    Ok, let me start by saying, HOLY SHIT THIS IS THE MOST HILIARAWESOME THING EVER. Indeed. I couldn't help but chuckle the whole way through (I could've choked y'know!), especially the parts where Pinkie tried to help out with her adorable little 'I don't know what's going on here-- But it needs cupcakes!' state of mind, only to be shot down by everyone else. Her optimism towards the whole event kept it from feeling grimdarkish in any way, shape, or form, which was a VERY good thing. I kinda wish there was a little more, uh, explicit detail with the whole Luna horning Twilight thing, though it's quite apparent that this wasn't that type of story :p (Y'know, come to think of it that was pretty fucked up...) The only thing that I could really gripe about was that I felt like Pinkie didn't delve into the minor details as much as she really should have (like what was going on with Rarity the whole time). It's understandable as Pinkie Pie is pretty off the walls, but I think it could have been improved with a bit more description. Don't get me wrong, though; it's excellent the way it is.

    And now onto the writing. Your grammar/structure/word choice were superb. Pinkie felt so in character it hurt, and your tasteful use of scattered run-ons/exclamations/imperfect grammar fit her like a glove. It totally shows that you know what you're doing. Dialogue was spot-on, however there were maybe one or two instances where I could see something worded differently to be a bit more, "Pinkieish". For the most part it was still great.

    Overall, this story had a little bit of everything:
    Humor, cuteness, wtfness, more humor, good execution- I mean, what else could you want! Weak review, but it's something I guess...
    Easy 5/5, and I'm now compelled to read up on some of your other works, MLP or not- you've got quite a few!
    Keep up the good work, buddy. And please, never stop writing!
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  • From JayDee on March 11, 2011
    Heh, as I noted once before I don't really know this fandom - I remember the MLP from the eighties a little bit, but even that's vague so if I have missed any good series nods, uh... ooops. That out the way I enjoyed your MLP prompts so thought I'd give this a try - plus as promotions go, the gore scale had me hooked "0.6 JayDees" :D - we ought to get this scientifically tested, all the way up to nothing left but a fine red haze...

    Ahem, so the title made me smile especially with it followed with a grab bag of the grimmer codes, and it feels MLP to my aforementioned vague knowlege! (I wonder if those 80s ponies ended up battling drink and drugs like former movie and tv stars...)

    Okay, so the story! I was thinking there had to be something a little funny about the narator pony, and then when one of the others explicitly stated it, it showed you'd been aiming for that. Right on! It's all kind of sweetness and utter confusion for the narator all the way through except for that one line "And I shoved Celestia's horn right into her fucking chest." which really makes that line stand out powerfully. Wasn't expecting Spike's plan to get twilight's bridle off either, and that works well it's a good plot turn.

    The note near the end about the sun and the moon continuing on also made me smile, you gotta wonder if 'everypony' was waking up each day thinking "Fuck it! We've been had!"
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