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By : Andyouthinkimcrazy
  • From ANON - Fangeh on October 03, 2011
    Aw poor Kraz lol Really good chapter to help move the story along as well. Bah I'm having trouble reviewing it tonight, still frazzled after my longest chem lab ever. :/ But trust me it is a very good chapter and your oc Kraz does not detract from the story at all and makes for a very fun POV.
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on September 17, 2011
    Oh man first off welcome back! :3 Second, I love love love my childhood nintendo memories :) I'm so tempted to get the new Zelda games for the DS. Ok and Thirdly ugh! LOVED this chapter! The way you wrote Dib and Zim reacting to the whole ordeal was perfect. You really do these characters their story universe justice. I just love your writing so much for this story XD Looking forward to the next chapter ^^ Have fun with zelda! I've had to settle with watching videos of play-throughs on youtube hehe.
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on July 29, 2011
    Aww You're oh so welcome! This was an amazing chapter, the plot is really building now and its quite exciting! So glad Zim got to kill Iso :D hehe As for typos, I didn't see any glaring ones at all, just a few grammar typos really so I hope you won't have too much work if you come back to edit it more. Its very very readable now though and I didn't have to stop and re-read a spot trying to figure out what was being said either so that's good lol. Thank you for getting this chapter out despite being tired and before your vacation ^^ Enjoy your time off! I'll be here patiently waiting for the next awesome chapter :3
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  • From uniqueindividual on July 28, 2011
    lol, the cabbage patch kids thin at the end. Also, Iso was kind of full of himself by the end...although he did succeed in raping an alien....yeah. Glad he is dead, not so glad that Zim is some alien equivalent of being pregnant. Anyways...I look forward to more!
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  • From uniqueindividual on July 23, 2011
    Whoa, I think you've unleashed a new fetish in fanfiction for me...bravo...I think. Regardless, I am captivated by this story, and look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - fangeh on July 18, 2011
    Wow! What a wonderful chapter to have waited on! hehe This new Pak thing is interesting, and I feel like I know where it might lead but I'll wait to find out when the next chapter comes out :3 Keep up the good work and enjoy the vacation :D I'll be busy getting to my 3rd year of college at the end of next month.
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on June 25, 2011
    I get the same way with drawing, but I always get frustrated it the desire to draw never lasts long lol. Anyways, oh man, oh man poor Zim! But I loved it, very nice chapter! I love that your bring ZADR into this now too :3 lol I can't wait to see Dib's reaction to Zim's words haha. Enjoy your drawing time while it lasts ^^
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on June 10, 2011
    Yes Zim, get your Zimy self back into action! Loved that part, poor Zim though lol. Love how kind Dib is being in your story, and is inner turmoil with his morals (forgot to mention that in the first review I gave you). Can't wait to find out what Zim will do in your next chapter!
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  • From InvaderLindana on June 07, 2011
    Wow,I just started reading this today and I got all the way to chapter 13. I love this. I could definitely learn a lot from you about writing. That Iso guy really creeps me out! I knew he was trouble the moment he entered the story.

    Aww, I feel so sorry for Dib and Zim! I just wanna cut Iso's nuts off! 0.o

    But, anyway I really like the way you write and thanks for reviewing my stories. Without you I would have never realized my stories suck. ^^'

    More Please! XD
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on June 04, 2011
    :D Thanks for that little sneak peak and the little 'deleted scenes' lol. Can't wait for next chapter, looks like its gonna be a good one! :3
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on May 03, 2011
    I don't think this chapter or the others are 'filler' at all! I'm very much enjoying the tension. Thank you so much for another chapter! As for writing a oneshot I say go for it if you think it could help. Might allow new ideas to spring forth for this story. And don't feel bad if you tire yourself out working, you'll get to writing when you can ^^. I wish I could be of more help to you with inspiration. Oh and the sexy will come when its ready I say, don't force it ;) lol
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  • From ANON - Fangeh on April 09, 2011
    Thank you so much for being able to make the 9th chapter! :) You do a wonderful job at keeping them in character and your style of writing is very pleasing! Keep up the great work please and thank you :3
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  • From mangafan051 on April 09, 2011
    Another update? So soon? *dies*

    I really like this chapter....not because of the impending rape, though that's good, too. I have improbable hopes for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - AnK on April 07, 2011
    Goodness, all this build-up; you are VERY good at keeping us all on the edge of our seats. It is ever so sexy, yet I can't help thinking 'WHY MUST YOU TAUNT US SO?!' D: But still, I look forward to each chapter, even if it is more sexy, sexy build-up.

    ...Now that they've both been caught, I can't help but hope that after this Iso guy has his way with them, he'll force them to do some very naughty things with one another. But I'm probably being very unrealistic in this hope of mine. XD
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  • From ANON - 'Nilla on April 07, 2011
    ... I really shouldn't find this so sexy. Ergh. Do go on!
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