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Reviews for The Cindy Trixie Power Hour!

By : TheEvilFaery
  • From ANON - GlaceEx on March 12, 2015
    This is so brilliant! Needs more chapters please!
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on October 18, 2014
    Bra-fucking-vo sir. Fan-god damn-tastic! Without a doubt, one of the best stories I have read in a long long while.
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  • From FairySlayer on July 20, 2010
    DISCLAIMER: I am the proofreader. (I suppose that mean you can blame me for any typos.)

    The story started off very well at "the end" of a Jimmy-Timmy Power Hour, quickly explaining away the boys' exploits. As a bonus, their return was simple, slimy (a Nickelodeon thing?) and the imagery reminds me of something... perverted. Better yet, it gets us there without getting bogged down in the details. However, if there had been any risk of that then Cindy's beautifully described appearance would have pushed all of that out of my mind anyway. Her little act to set the boys off on a jealousy-fueled war was fun enough.

    Then Trixie came and stole the show from Cindy most easily and quite gorgeously.

    It was funny yet realistic how Trixie really didn't understand what she'd done to Cindy's "plan." While Trixie offered an apology it seemed like she enjoyed Cindy's excited upbraiding so much that she then tried to make it worse for herself. I'm still not sure whether Trixie really hadn't understood that she'd made Cindy feel like a 'second prize' or if she just wanted to get the cute little blonde riled up even more, even if she finally conceded. Still, I had to wonder about everything Trixie said after, "it's just henna," (delivered with a subtle yet terrific action), but that was just part of why watching the game was so much fun.

    Now that I think about it, even though Trixie was the instigator for the most part, maybe she was really just bluffing the whole time in a sense: once Cindy "struck back" by calling Trixie's bluff it seemed like Trixie only wanted to see what she could get away with, but she did it in steps because she was afraid of going too far and putting Cindy off. Meanwhile Cindy started off normal (for Cindy) but then kept getting more and more revved up as Trixie's game played out. I especially liked how she slowly became more aggressive as Trixie kept teasing and doing her best to keep Cindy frustrated at every turn. Still, by the time they got to Trixie's bedroom there seemed to be some lingering negative feelings about being overshadowed in addition to all of their "bonding" that had happened since. And Cindy had become a time bomb.

    I love how after Trixie revealed her deepest secret she then turned submissive, handing herself over to the blonde. It was a great transition, as if handing the shoebox to Cindy was actually like handing her full control, and Cindy had no problem making the best of both!

    The last bit of self-control Cindy showed before going over the edge was acknowledging Trixie's fear of being whipped with her belt, whether or not Cindy had been joking in the first place. The light bondage worked out wonderfully anyway, especially when Cindy finally lost it and only wanted to dominate Trix. (Couldn't help myself. :)) It was funny how Trixie had practically spelled out for Cindy that the blonde wanted the boys to fight only so she'd feel like she had great power — enough to make them willing, even anxious to feel pain just for her. However, from what I can tell Cindy never consciously understood that, even as she was pounding Trixie with al of her might, at one point practically trying to "blot Trixie out of existence" with her lustful wrath. Then by the time she'd both thoroughly abused and satisfied the blonde still couldn't stop herself from that last act of domination, even threatening Trixie with real harm (suffocation) if she didn't give her oral sex even though Trixie was so weak, exhausted and already hurting a lot. But that only made it easier for Cindy to step over that edge.

    Fortunately, once Cindy realized (and relished) what she had done to the conceited older girl she was extremely satisfied, emotionally and physically, plus she'd made a new and special kind of friend. After all, when she had to argue with Libby it would usually end with at least one girl feeling bad; any hackles raised while dealing with Trixie would just be part of their game, and there would always be some sort of back-and-forth for them to stay interested, even anxious.

    It's clear that Trixie started to like it when she "loses," whether it's just being yelled at or having herself subjected to her most hardcore submissive fantasies — and then Cindy's even harder ones.

    Wow, that was a lot longer than I intended, but that's only because this story is terrifically engaging and much, much more exciting, both sexually and psychologically. I was more than happy to read it carefully a few times during it's creation and then again after it was completely finished. I won't need any excuses to go back and read it again either.
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  • From sciencerules19 on July 18, 2010
    great story would love to see another chapter maybe get timmy and jimmy in on it maybe some m/m and some m/m/f
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