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Reviews for A Possible Pony

By : TheEvilFaery
  • From Oric13 on November 11, 2017

    This is some wonderfully written lesbian D/s fanfic.

    Loved all the naughty stuff with Kim and Joss, but for some reason my favorite part of the story was the scene with the little Kim devil & angel. So delightfully funny and precocious!

    Very well done.


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  • From Lunarsilver on May 14, 2017

    Will there be another chapter where Joss is wearing nothing but what Kim gave her to wear last time and makes Joss walk even trott like a horse outside and Joss not only loves obeying Kim but also the breeze of the air on her breasts, pussy and ass while Kim watches Joss get wet from accepting her role as Kim's submissive.


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  • From lycan on May 05, 2013
    You should add to this. not to mention lesbian BDSM stories, and this is one of my favorties.
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  • From ANON - Duncan on November 27, 2012
    a grate fic hope you do more kim possible fic's espeshely if they have joss in themlike this one did
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  • From coldfang66 on October 20, 2012
    This fic was ridiculously good! The dialogue, the pairing, and everything else were just amazingly well done. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
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  • From FanFicFantast on July 30, 2010
    Simply astounding reading here. Hot smut with both story, emotion and thought behind it. Ny hat off to you Miss (Or Mr.), and a bow. I realy hope you continue on this story, or do more work in the Kim Possible universe.
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  • From Sabbs on July 29, 2010
    I thought I commented on this story but perhaps it was another, anyway I really liked this one. Hope you write more, you really did a great job with this one. Keep up the great work.
    Sincerely Sabbs
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  • From lonegrizzly on July 24, 2010
    I love this storie i can not what for the next chapter and good job.
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  • From FairySlayer on July 21, 2010
    It was fun to re-read this gem, though the gem is still a little rough. There are some typos and a few punctuation issues, and there's a simple continuity mistake where the scene jumps from the living room to the guest room. No big. (... especially since your awesome proofreader couldn't check it because was in the hospital and then recovering. Maybe he'll make it up to you somehow now.)

    First, you nailed Kim's and Slim's personalities quite well. The set-up was true to the show, and with the bit about a semester in China you nicely hinted that time had passed since the show ended. That also worked in favor when you described how Joss' body had developed since Kim had last seen her.

    There was some good humor in the writing style itself, though it was obvious from the tone that you were mostly emulating Kim's voice for the bits of commentary. "Being left alone with the Princess of Darkness hadn't really been the plan," gave me a great big laugh.

    The changes in Joss affect were described very well, and I love that you worked in Ember and the faintest hint of your Christmas Story ("The Little Matched Girl," which I assume will be showing up here in time for the holidays). Better yet, we got to see into her mind as she visibly was repressing her excitement at seeing Kim to keep up her Goth act. As the story went on you portrayed her self-loathing and disgust wonderfully while also writing a great and hard masturbation scene; fortunately Kim seemed to enjoy it as well.

    It was also fun to see Kim trying to decide how she'd help her little cousin, especially knowing that she herself played a part in Joss' angst. The angel and devil scene was also a lot of fun, especially when the two eventually hooked up. For some reason that little bit about the angel Kim playfully swinging her legs while being held by the devil Kim made it seem extra real. It's funny how just the right little detail can make a scene so much better. (I'm jealous.)

    But then knowing what Joss wanted enabled Kim to let her own perversions blossom, to some extent. I even wonder if Kim knew she had already started playing out Joss' fantasies by simply forcing her to not run away during the confrontation. But after that it was clear that Kim wanted to help her cousin, and help herself to her cousin at the same time. Kim did a wonderful job of playing to Joss' domination fantasies while pushing aside all of the negative aspects and self-hatred the little girl had been feeling about her fantasies.

    The light bondage and heavy sex were terrific. Kim was very sweet to start easy, giving her cousin oral sex and then reassuring her that only Kim herself would get in trouble for what they were doing. The pony aspect was cute and you gave just enough description of most of the "toys" to make it clear what it was while also building up the anticipation. The only thing that was missing was a little more description after Joss was in full pony gear and Kim was standing back and looking her over — though I wouldn't have noticed if the tail had been described at some point. (The story had slipped into being Joss' point of view during the tacking up, so filling in the tiny missing details would have helped as you "zoomed out," as it were.)

    The sex itself was very descriptive and quite titillating. You fit in a fair amount of detail without bogging down the pace of the action, which was important because the story moved forward quickly at this point. We got to savor the actions and reactions of two young ladies who were nearly-naked in the BDSM gear.

    Finally, you ended on a nice high note when Slim returned. Not only was it clear that the two girls had been having a lot of fun throughout the week. Then Kim's invitation for Joss to spend the summer with her only left me wanting more, which is always a good thing.

    Thanks for writing and sharing.
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  • From locksley on July 18, 2010
    This was simply incredible. I feel confident enough to say that until you and your writing abilities came along adultfanfiction.net was a barren wasteland almost devoid of any real talent.

    ...granted that might of sounded exaggerated and a tad disrespectful to some of the better writers on this site, but I couldn't think of a better way to say how much I enjoy your work. I've read all your stories and each one is better than the last. I implore you to please, please, please not stop writing.

    Sincerely,
    an admirer

    p.s. I'm aware that this wasn't so much a review as it was a basking in your greatness. Forgive me.
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