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Reviews for Payback's a Pussy

By : FairySlayer
  • From GeorgeGlass on August 03, 2013
    Where do I begin? Not to my surprise, you really captured both the humor of the show and the voices of the characters. And any deviations are immediately explained (my favorite being Yan saying "Sorry" to Yin, followed by "Now that I have a girlfriend something tells me that I'll be saying that a lot").

    Other miscellaneous things I liked (prepare for a long list):
    -"Bunnymaker" = Neologism of the Year
    -Yin's obtuse response to "muff diving" and her later revelation that she understood all along
    -Lena's dialogue in general
    -The rescued Chung Pow Kitty doing the kneading thing in her sleep like a real cat
    -Satan Carlos' Restaurant and Abandoned Warehouse
    -The battering ram that's an actual ram...making batter. That is SO Yin Yang Yo!
    -'I spent all night battling my nemesis and all I got was this lousy T-shirt!'
    -'Once you go bunny, all else seems funny.'
    -Three-on-one CPK orgy. My, my.
    -The new application of Woo Foo Aura. Few things are simultaneously that funny and that sexy.
    -"There goes our deposit."
    -Master Yo's initial "Yang is a stud" reaction corrected to "You're in big trouble, mister!"
    -The kitties jumping the ram.
    -"She's standing right behind me, isn't she?"
    -Yin using the aroma of soft pretzels to seduce Master Yo.
    -"It's not like we're related or anything."

    The only bit that threw me off was the Ferengi joke, which was funny but took me out of the story for a second. (I never got the impression that they have real-world fiction in the YYY world.)

    But really, marvelous.
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  • From norri on May 19, 2012
    one of my favs

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  • From ANON - biostar123 on August 14, 2010
    This story was great. The plot and sex scenes were well written and funny.

    I facepalmed when Yang said his battle cry when he orgasmed.

    Hope to see a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Shiro_Wolfman_k on July 14, 2010
    You know, this is almost canon, the dialogs, the scenes and funny humor was what make me love this little fiction, you really did a good job in there.

    Thank you, this story has at least put a smile upon my face whit is humor, the sex was good, but the humor was amazing.
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