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Reviews for Mallow Out!

By : FairySlayer
  • From MrPunch1 on December 16, 2012
    Oh yes, this suits me quite nicely. I was never a big fan of the show itself but both Frankie and Mac were rather cute and endearing. I enjoyed Mac's timid nature, and you did a great job at transferring it into your story. Young boys are a mixture of fear and daring, and you showed that nicely. His awkwardness with Frankie was thus quite natural. The central theme of Frankie's fear and lust with all the complicated issues it brings forth was what made the story for me though. I think you captured the dilemma nicely. The sex itself was also a good piece of writing. All in all I enjoyed this little story and could only repeat what I already stated in my other review regarding the plot itself, so I'll just stop here.

    Good work.

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  • From Bennetnelson on August 15, 2012
    Wow, just wow!!!! This was great it was hot and heart retching (don't know if I spelled that right) another way of saying very moving. Have to admit did not see franky becoming a pedo that just had me dying on the floor from laughter! hope you come out with a sequel, very good job!!! Chow Bennet out.
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  • From ANON - hotshot on June 17, 2011
    love the work on your fic I hope that you post more i seems that some fics are been eraice please post more like the posting you have hope to see more
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  • From ANON - Fogu_s_Tofu (NLI) on May 24, 2010
    you said Frankie thought of girls too, what about Goo. She's always at the house.
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