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From Lunarsilver on July 10, 2016
Maybe before before dr.d got his evidence to prove it was ferbs dad that no one including Vanessa will be disgusted by the possibility her dad did or could do something like this instead proud by the fact that he may be an evil genius but he's no rapist, ferbs dad while searching fantasizes what bdsm punishment he will do to her for running or fantasizes about Stacy. Lying naked on the bed with her arms tied behind her back on top of naked Candice with her arms also tied behind her back, there chests pressing against each other as well as their pussys waiting for who's gonna get fucked by ferbs dad as they look at him with pleading fuck me master eyes not caring that he's video recording the whole thing they just care about who's gonna get fucked first but he couldn't decide, so he put one arm above his head with the video camera and angled it to get a full body shot of the two girls on top of each other as well as getting his dick in the shot as he rub his dick in between there pussys. when he came shortly after the girls who are still on top of each other with the back of there heads lying next to each other a few inches apart, Candace's right side of her face was lying rested on the bed while Stacy's left side of her face rested on the bed both girls with facial expressions of exhausted but best fuck ever (eyes rolled back mouth open and tongue out) ferbs dad covered there entire pressed together butts with his spunk then squirt shoted the rest barely covering both the girls seeable sides of their faces as ferbs dad got the whole thing on camera. Ferbs dad was not done yet but they were so instead of continuing with them even though he could if he wanted to instead he called for Isabella and Susie who showed up naked ferbs dad told them to give him a blow job while he recorded their faces looking at the camera then he climaxes on both their faces and in their mouths and then they both were fucked and recorded the same way Candace and Stacy were and same after faces with Isabella being on the bottom because she's bigger. Ferbs dad sat in his chair still not satisfied called for his wife to give him a blowjob as she looks at the camera and as she did ferbs dad said to himself out loud no one can stop me his wife temporarily stopped to say and no one ever will then continued giving him a blowjob then the scene starts to fade as he laughs at how right she is.

Hope you can use this idea

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From Lunarsilver on July 10, 2016
Is it ok if I give you an idea for the next chapter

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From GeorgeGlass on August 10, 2013
I knew that this story would be disturbing, but I didn't know how much. Egads.
Miscellaneous comments:
--The one particularly gratifying sexual bit was [spoiler] getting molested, given that she's pretty much the most evil character in the P&F universe. (Sorry, Doctor D.)
--The past tense of "lie" (as in to lie down) is "lay," not "lied."
--Doof never just calls his nemesis "Perry"; he always goes out of his way to call him "Perry the Platypus."
--Liked the "garage sale" line.
I'm going to go see if I can borrow the Amnesia-inator. It's a testament to your writing skill that you could put these images in my head, but I really want them out now.
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From geekguy on July 08, 2013
I want to see this story finished. I want to see Lawrence get what's coming to him (some how, at the hands of whatever P&F are putting together with without alerting Lynn. Or maybe she should find out and get a kick in herself!)
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From ANON - Inumaru12 on November 26, 2011
Wow, this is just wow at times. Especially with how messed up this is, I love how Perry is trying his very best to save Candace. I hope to read more.

Inumaru12
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From EJKorvette on August 19, 2011
Okay, how exhiliratingly inappropriate!

But I couldn't stop reading.

The way the author made all this sick disgusting stuff so believable, I wonder what the author has been up to.

I am surprised you didn't work The Fireside Girls into your depraved tale. Or will that be Chapter 7?

Some of the pairings were pretty obvious. Some were really unexpected, such as Lawrence using Suzy as a remote control to do stuff to Candace.

Can't wait for Chapter 7!
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From ANON - Doggerel on August 15, 2011
Oh my god...please, PLEASE continue this! It's just...auugh I have no words...freakin' AWESOME, is what! You write the characters so well, I could see (and hear) it all in my head....and now I can't even watch Lawrence on the show anymore without thinking of him as a TOTAL CREEPER, haha. Something about that mellow voice...idk man. I gotta know what happens next, and can't be the only one! Oh, the part with Heinz misinterpreting the "rape kit"...I literally guffawed...Perry's role throughout is so heartbreakingly sweet and desperate..when Linda picks him up and says "he missed you too" and there's a tear in his eye you can just feel his helplessness with the whole situation...Stacy being so loving and selfless with Candace really got to me...and ugh, I want to murder Suzy. And then there was Ferb coming on to Candace, and the way you wrote him he was so in-character....I wanna see where that goes. Hell, they're ALL incredibly in-character, even with the bizarre subject matter...it takes a very skilled writer to do that.
/end semi-coherent babble

tl;dr YOU MUST FINISH THIS STORY. PLEASE.
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From ANON - Savannah on August 11, 2011
hmmm this is geting good, will candance be heinz second chance at being a proper daddy? i am glad perry got into it, reading all those chapters i had one thoughton my mind "Perry would never let something like this happen, he has to have a plot to save her!" so i'm glad you wrote this chapter, cant wait for more!
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From PurpleLizard on August 06, 2011
UPDATE ALREADY!!!! I've been waiting!!

patiently I might add......
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From ANON - Nekoshoujo on June 24, 2011
Hey, just reviewing to tell you how intriguing this story is so far. Not only is it well-written, it also has dialogue in it that could suggest that this is an X-rated version of the show.

I particularly want to see what Doofenshmirtz does about Candace.

Please update this soon. ;)
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From pittwitch on November 20, 2010
Yay for Perry! Love the platypus! Interesting switch on the normal evil stepmother theme. Not so sure about the cartoon thing for me anyway. Had to stop when my kids turned P&F on in the RL. Still love that Perry is the hero! Thanks for sharing, PW
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From ANON - Shiro_Wolfman_k on July 14, 2010
This is one of the stories that I can acept by any means, just because I dont think that Lawrence would do that, yes is a story and for you to reach what you are trying to say, I just can't stand nor acept the Idea of him being a rapist.

I flash readed all the story so far, I din't minded the Stacy/Candace because, well, in some part of my mind I find that, THAT could happen, even if motivated by simple curiosity, Phineas and his mom, well that is done almost in all the fanmedia, Isabella and Phineas that's a almost needed matter, and, I would say that they are a few questions that I would like some answers, but it's probably that I will never read this again.

It's seems that Susy was not only raped but, probably coerced to be in his hands, and could probably never scape, Isabella seems to know that LAwrence is dangerous, or at least, I think that he abused her in a moment, something I despise just to think.

And Poor Dr, Doofenzmirzt, This will not end well, whit is usually luck, he will be caught, and he will pay the prize for being "good", and it will be probably his own daughter who "busted" him.

PArt of me whant to find a Happy ending to this story, but my real and really nasty side has told me that's probably not gonna happen.

So sorry, but this is not what I was looking for.
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From PurpleLizard on May 06, 2010
"Fenton Works", Racoon City being dead. Am I the only one who finds this funny? Classic bits the lot of them.

I think you captured the characters well, dispite the content, it fallows the shows style really well. And that's hard to do in most cases.
I for one hope Perry's plan works. All the rest on them seam to be doing it cuz they want to, or out of love, or at least out of a positive place. Hugh is a guy who is manipulating, controlling, and a bit of a sadist,. He may not of put candice in her curent state, but he seems responsible for the pain she feels. So, Go Perry!

What ever you do, I'm excited to see more.
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From ANON - Christopher on May 05, 2010
Personally, I hope that Perry's plan absolutely fails! I like Hugh, and it's not what he is doing that is driving Candace nuts in the slightest.
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From UnknownReviewer on April 21, 2010
It's spelled Suzy rather than Susie, by the way. Also I noticed some mistakes in the grammar in I believe the second chapter, I'll try to find them again.

I've been enjoying your brand of creepy eroticism for this story. I registered to the site to leave a comment since you don't allow anonymous reviews. I assume you don't get the comments that I think you should be getting, due to the fact that you involve children in sexual aspects of your stories. That might turn some people off. That's not a knock against you or anything, I enjoy it. I also appreciate that you're timely with your updates.

One thing I really enjoy about your story are certain vague implications of the relationship between Candace and her father.
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