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Reviews for A Birthday Wish

By : eoraptor
  • From BaddGrrl on December 23, 2017

    Fun


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  • From ANON - Bookfisher on March 01, 2016
    Aww cute pornstory, neatly done
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  • From lycan on July 20, 2014
    Damn, Monique's evil.
    Oh and, Boo? Wtf does that mean?
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  • From lycan on July 20, 2014
    Shego x Monique? ...HOT!
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  • From Levi2000a on August 12, 2012
    Good story with some unusual sitches and pairings but I like it and hope to see another update soon. Please?
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  • From bigherb81 on August 10, 2012
    Glad to see you're still kicking out there. Enjoyed the new chapter and glad to see that you corrected that little issue of Ron being shunned by Felix and Zita. I mean in the show they were more his friends than Kim's. Anywho glad to see you back at it still the last chapter confused me a bit I thought he already got a pep talk from Shego? Ah well I guess that will all be explained next time out. Also I hope Ron eventually explains he's not a pedo to Kim.
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  • From Christopher11 on August 09, 2012
    All of this could be avoided with the dismissal of the 'one and only love' bullshit. It's been a lie for centuries and it will always be a lie. Best thing for men AND women to do: don't lock yourself to any one partner.
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  • From NarutosBrat on November 10, 2009
    I completely agree with Monique. Shego mentioned that Kim was lucky that someone hadn't gone after him sooner. I think that if Yori had been the one that had seduced him instead of Joss, she could have pulled off the coup. The fact that she's a ninja means that she has the cunning it would take to make a serious go of it.

    By the way, Shego and monique...extra hot pairing.
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  • From bigherb81 on October 19, 2009
    Nice one I must admit you have a knack for the "lemon" scene. That was another goodun.
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  • From skoshi4 on October 15, 2009
    DarkDannyPhantom did a picture of Zita and Felix in this situation. I think that it's in WWOEC.
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  • From KaelHyun on October 15, 2009
    I know this sight is mostly about smutt but Im realy hopeing for a story chapter (aka with Ron or Kim because there interesting charictors and ofcorse theres the posabilaty of the thought of RKMS relationship which is realy interesting
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  • From skoshi4 on October 14, 2009
    Excellent story, Eoraptor! Anxious for the next installment.
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  • From bigherb81 on October 09, 2009
    Hey been a while since I've been to the site, but your story caught my attention and it is awsome. Not a huge fan of the young girl stuff, but I like how you did it anime style, making the young girl the aggressor. Also glad you did go the route of making an actual and believable fallout to things as well. Don't get me wrong I like the whole random sex thing from time to time, but I like the story aspect you have going here. Also the fact that you don't have Ron completely on the wayside when people talk about him. I'm a Ron fan like to see him be the player every once in a while (reluctant is better than d-bag). Just saying glad that Ron wasn't forgotten as Kim went on some lesbian escapade or seen as asshole by everyone and treated like crap, or offed himself. Anywho sorry bout the rant there, but awsome, AWSOME, story and I hope you can find time to update soon.
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  • From Ffourteen on October 08, 2009
    I like this story, I've had fun reading it.
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  • From Jawelik on October 01, 2009
    Nice story. I have a thing for eager and aggressive girls, so I quite enjoyed the scene in the first chapter. You also took the story after that exactly where I hoped it would go, with Kim finding out, and Ron dealing with the aftermath. I'm enjoying it much and look forward to your next update.

    -Jawelik
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