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Reviews for Paranoia

By : LouisLockhart
  • From LadyOfDaGame on April 24, 2011
    WTF?????? okay im confused uh this completely went over my head ???? why kill himself and if he couldn't live without Dark why uggh i don't get it its so hard to put this in words ....This story had a ?Twisted ending
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  • From moonlight1393 on October 02, 2010
    This is a very griping story. I actually went on a bender and read all of the chapters in one sitting. Its such a tragic story and yet it still beautiful. The detail you gave all throughout the story is easy to read and imagine the actions in the words. I could go on about all the greatness of this story, but I'll sum it up here: You're an awsome author and I absolutly love this story!
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  • From Unolai on August 08, 2010
    *sniffles* Don't give me that look! *sniff* I got something in my eye, okay?! *wails*
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  • From ANON - Martel on June 02, 2010
    THIS REVIEW IS SPOILERIFIC FOR THOSE OF YOU READING THE REVIEWS BEFORE DECIDING IF YOU WANT TO READ THE STORY OR NOT (like I often do).

    (By the way, if you have trouble deciding: Read it so long as you're not weak of heart, stomach or mind. This story will rape your mind and leave you begging for MORE.)


    .....DO NOT READ THIS REVIEW BEFORE FINISHING THE STORY AS IT GIVES AWAY THE ENDING AND IT WILL PROBABLY RUIN THE EXPERIENCE FOR YOU.....



    I REPEAT: DO NOT READ THIS REVIEW BEFORE FINISHING THE STORY. IT GIVES AWAY THE ENDING AND IT WILL PROBABLY RUIN THE EXPERIENCE FOR YOU.



    NO, REALLY, I MEAN IT. :O



    YOU'RE WELCOME FOR THE WARNING. :D


    Martel approves very much of tender love-making, even when it leads to murder-suicide. XD

    (Er... sorry the warning was huger than the review itself. I've just been spoiled waaaay too many times in the past. XD)

    (Re-captcha: "his detest" OMFG IT'S SENTIENT.)
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on March 09, 2010
    Love the new chapter!!!! Something tells me that Vlad will be back though, after all he is part ghost so either living or a ghost I have a feeling he'll be back!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on March 08, 2010
    I saw that you updated on Fanfiction.net, so when are you gonna update here?
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on March 02, 2010
    PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO UPDATE SOON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE UPDATE HERE OR ON Fanfiction.net!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on January 07, 2010
    Finally Danny is coming clean it's about fucken time!!!! I just can't wait too see Vlad's reaction when Danny tell's hime what's been happening, cause nothing's hotter than a possessive Vlad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on January 04, 2010
    I think that Jazz should talk to Vlad about all of this than he can get the truth out of HIS BADGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Martel on December 31, 2009
    :O

    Holy shit, I think I love you (platonically, of course).

    Really, I have nothing to nitpick at, nothing to complain about. It was perfect.

    Everything was interesting and I think that was a good point to stop the chapter.

    I like how Danny is slowly crumbling, and the hints that Dark is not as happy with his sociopathy/life as he tries to get everyone to believe. And Dash and Jazz knowing and not being able to stop it. (I eagerly await the epic confrontation with between Jazz and Danny, and possibly Vlad later on.)
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  • From DaggersApprentice on December 31, 2009
    Mm, nice development going on here. I like that Vlad is picking up on things - as one of your other reviewers pointed out, definite potential for some extreme protective/possessiveness in later chapters, namely after he finds out (as I'm sure he will). It's also refreshing to see that Sam and Tucker (or especially Tucker at least) aren't completely dumb to the fact that Danny's capable of keeping secrets; it seems too often that the friends/family are just totally out of the loop to a ridiculous extent. Couldn't help but be a little pissed at Dash for hearing something obviously bad happening but then just scampering off with his tail between his legs, but sadly enough, it seemed very in character (or at least an easily believable reaction).

    What will Jazz do to let Danny know she knows now? (Or knows to some extent, in any case.) When will Vlad find out and what will he do when he does? How will Danny react to becoming slowly more "used to" this awful treatment? And what is Clockwork's grand plan? Hm, hm, hmm...something tells me this is all a master plot to shove Vlad and Danny together early on before he messes it up later in life (or just never goes for it). I have to wonder if there couldn't have been a way to get them together that didn't involve allowing him to be repeatedly raped by his older persona...but then there wouldn't be this story then, would there?

    'Til next time,
    ~Dagger
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on December 17, 2009
    I love it!!! The Dan/Danny/Vlad triangle it's a work of art!!!! And it's also my faveorite pairing. I can't wait to see Vlad's reaction when he finds out about what's been happening to Danny, knowing how possessive he is he's going to blow a blood vessle. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From DaggersApprentice on November 26, 2009
    Oh dear, definitely some none-too-secretive foreshadowing there in the last chappie. I have to assume Danny will somehow end up getting himself invited to this party, yes? And with Dark there hm-hmm...well, safe to say he probably won't have a jolly good time.

    As for the rest of it...poor Danny. I know it's gotta be an awful thing to try to talk about or explain, but I'm surprised he hasn't broken down yet and let somebody know what he's going through. I like that Jazz and Sam and Tucker at least aren't totally oblivios, but one of them needs to get tactful and pull him aside and talk to him in a way that actually gets him to open up instead of curl in on himself. At this point he obviously desperately needs at least one character to find solace in, a shoulder to cry on...or if nothing else, at least an outlet so it doesn't all build up inside and drive him crazy - like it is.

    Well, anyway, since you seem to be the only other author active in this section and you're writing slash...I figured I'd check it out. I'll keep an eye open for updates. :)

    ~Dagger
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  • From ANON - Martel on November 05, 2009
    D: Poor Danny. I really do wonder where all this is going.
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  • From pauledwards1 on October 08, 2009
    me like me want more
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