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Reviews for Fun at the Pool.By : WrotedForYou |
- From NostalgiaDestroyer on January 20, 2016
Wow, i gotta admit this is probably one of the better stories out there. Very enjoyable, very familiar in a way. I don't know if it was the way the characters matched their personalities from the show to a tee (which is easy to botch by some) or the scenes that give an almost nostalgic sensation. The only thing that i didn't like was the epilogue. it seemed a little out of character for Arthur's parents to be so passive. Mostly i guess its because i really hate to see such a good piece end.
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- From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2014
I thought it was very good. Your great a describing how people are feeling. I hope you write more.
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- From master30 on June 27, 2011
I love chapter 4 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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- From master30 on June 27, 2011
I love chapter 3 it was great.
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- From master30 on June 27, 2011
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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- From master30 on June 27, 2011
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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