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By : KoiWrites
  • From shayneandspike on April 17, 2009
    *Wipes drool* That was HOT! Wow... Are you planning a part two, where Stan decides that he DOES want Kyle inside him? THAT would be awesome too, Wendy's out, presumably shopping, and the boys decide they don't want to wait for her to come back? They'd be better off without her! Keep up the wonderful work! -Shayne
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  • From on February 21, 2009
    This story is the best smut fic I've read on AFF in some time. The Stan/Kyle/Wendy relationship has always interested me, and it's good to find that other authors besides me see the potential in that group pairing. Most would just stick to the cliche Stan/Kyle or Stan/Wendy. Although you used a common plot device (Wendy cheating), Stan's reaction was certainly out of the ordinary. I found your slow build to the threesome scene and the attempts at discussion and compromise before it realistic. In the interest of helping you grow as a writer, I suppose I should also point out your weaknesses. Some things felt a bit rushed to me, such as the Kyle/Stan initial kiss. Likewise, some things didn't add up. For instance, Kyle not wanting Bebe because she's a slut, yet he'll do Wendy who's a known cheater? For the most part though, as I said, your story was great! I hope to see more South Park stuff from you in the near future.
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