Reviews for More than meets the eye

BY : slayer-of-evil


  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2011

    You're doing good so far, you just need to lengthen the chapters some more! I hope see how Adam and Teela will react to getting married. This site needs more stories about Adam/He-Man and Teela being together!

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  • From brainfear on June 19, 2009

    I'm interested in your fanfic idea, but the fic is too short and in script format. I think readers would be more inclined to read this fic if you changed those things.

    Just my 2 cents.

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  • From nasty man on June 14, 2009

    Interesting story, slayer of evil.
    Short, sweet(I think) and...to the point?

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