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Reviews for Toph Always Tops

By : AloofandAndrogynous
  • From ANON - Douglas on February 12, 2015
    Hello all, and a very big Hello to our writer.
    Its been now over a year since my last review here... and not alots changed, except for a couple more reviews? Darn! Please, a little more???
    And I've been thinking about that... So, `the Ember Island players`, and this story, takes place when the gang hides out and pauses before the comet. Azula is in the capitol, Ty Lee and Mai are in lock-up somewhere, but there are others on the island. Whose party was crashed in `the beach`? That young man is probably STILL pulling skut detail community service ON TOP of working off what his old man had to pay out to contractors to repair the vacation house. Think Hurricane Katrina; but even without a storm blowing through, that kid having to comb ALL the shoreline himself, every odd day! Even days??.. what else would You stick your teenager with for a punishment? But....
    Lets say one particular day he is stuck as assistant-chaperone... for pre-school/primary school wading pool! '".oh, boy! I say, boy! my little Zan has filled his nappy. Here, do take this away, the smell is upsetting me just so..."' HA! But then, he gets a second look at the mother? DEFINITE MILF!!! Think Jin, everyone. Yeah, he jumps to getting that nasty diaper, if only to hide a boner before turning away and quickly heading upshore. No one notices... but someone does `see`. Later in the early evening, and of course he's stuck with the last police-call, he notices a girl down aways, sitting off to one side under a tree, more hunched over than laid back. As he gets closer he thinks 'she doesn't look like she'd be very tall', and finally grunts a `hey` her way as he nears. `Could you guess what time it is` he hears, only to stop and look at her, with her head held low and her bangs falling over her face, 'how'd she see me?' before realizing where his shadow was. 'duh'
    `Its an open beach, but at this end its going to get dark fast once the Sun slips behind the Northern Craig.` `Oh, I know, but with it dark... I thought I'd finally be brave enough to try... skinny-dipping.`

    Run with it, dude! just run with it. Please, something? Anything?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 04, 2014
    Are you going to make more chapters?
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  • From ANON - doug on October 16, 2013
    Its me again... two years later??!!??
    I've been going over other sites, such as P&P for B'Elanna/Seven and Rizzoli & Isles, and have been following various links from posted stories only to find the authors' main site... just gone. As the years have gone by, sooo many wonderful sites from the turn of the Millennium, whether -shippers or a single fandoms (such as BuffytVS or Stargate:SG1) just close up. A fair percentage of such were a-.geocities domain, and ALL geocities went away a few years ago. Too bad, as there were a couple nice ones built around real science and music ( really, no fanfics) that were very useful.
    I've popped into here for other fandoms, but this "Legend of Korra"? thought I might take a peek. And reread all of this one... to find Nothing else has been added?????!!!!!! and gosh, nearly spot on two years since my last (okay, only) posting??
    Please, please pleasepleaseplease PLEASE!! do more?? };-> Please???
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  • From ANON - Doug on October 11, 2011
    Oh, Ouch, but I hurt! Why?? I've had to beat off twice in the last hour, having wandered through the comics and reading the last three chps, which is now up to 4. Read Bath time and the first chp to this last night, but had to head to work early.
    I think you could have used a little more time to show that your Toph and Katara have explored more of each other, as it looks like once Suki joined them and She was the focus, it sounded like Katara Had experimented on Toph, at least in passing, to have some knowledge on what to do to Suki.
    It seemed like Toph has just plain been `in charge` of the encounters between her and Katara, is all. Or did I miss where Toph would entice and encourage Katara to be more giving of her own gifts?
    Otherwise, I am looking forward Very Much to your other chps. Maybe the 3 in a daisy-chain?
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  • From ANON - b on August 18, 2011
    loved it hope you'll make this a full orgy with what suki mentioned about the boys.
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  • From ANON - Blerie on August 09, 2011
    About damn time you updated! That was hot!
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  • From ANON - john on May 01, 2011
    heyi thoght it was amazing lol in all honesty i almost hate that pairing but i have to admit u are very good lol any way i realy hope u do more im aang-shus to read the next chater. i know bad joke but couldnt pass it up
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  • From ANON - belladonna on October 15, 2010
    I can't say how glad I am to find this.
    Your writing is admirably exciting. And to think of Suki in the middle (heh)!
    Please do update! I swear I'm just going to sit here and wait for it.

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  • From ANON - rain of sand on July 25, 2010
    i lov lov lov lov lov lov lov lov lov this pairing~! and this fan fic!
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  • From Kataangfanficer on July 22, 2010
    1000/10 ^_^

    This is definitely my favorite of all of your amazing stories. Bringing Suki in when a nice change of pace. :)
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  • From ANON - thespankygrape on July 22, 2010
    I thoroughly enjoyed this hot story. You are truly skilled at writing this sort of thing. I was a little disappointed however, because I expected Katara to water whip tentacle fuck Toph. I mean why does Toph have to be top? They are both stong, tough, independent women who don't take crap, you said so yourself. They could both be switches. Perhaps Kat could water fuck Suki? My suggestion is to finish writing chapter 3 "enter suki" and have hot three way lesbian sex, then add one of the guys and work it's way to a full on ultimate avatar orgy.
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  • From ANON - aceofqueens on July 21, 2010
    Your hot stories are like drugs. Not only is it simply hot, but it actually MAKES SENSE and has events based on the personalities of the characters. It's like, that could actually happen, you now?
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  • From ANON - Drizzy1932 on July 21, 2010
    wow. You must right more.
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  • From ANON - i am russianu on July 21, 2010
    i love this hot shit
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  • From ANON - goiyard on July 21, 2010
    this is some hot stuff...please please keep writing
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