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Reviews for Into The Burning Night

By : Jayrich
  • From kimpo212 on July 17, 2010
    I liked this story alot, especially the smutty parts- I can't wait to read more, and I'm kinda hoping for a threesome with Ty-Lee and Suki ^_* I haven't read a combination of that one yet.
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  • From ANON - Caligula on August 17, 2008
    It really is a good story.
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  • From ANON - Sarcasmic on August 09, 2008
    Need Moar
    This story is brillant.

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  • From JasonBanks on May 04, 2008
    Now, this next chapter will determine if this story is good or bad. You've taken quite a few liberties with the main characters and you will need to back up this chapter with a solid second chapter. On the writing side, I saw few mistakes and you let the story flow well. Update again soon!
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  • From YoukaiFate on May 04, 2008
    What an awesome start! I can't wait to find out what happens next. (Leer) The characters are very much IN character and the dialogue flows very nicely. The action scenes are fast-paced but accurate, keeping pace with everyone's manuevers. A lot of authors have trouble with that. I am totally caught up in this story and am dying to know how this will end. (What will Suki do? How will she react? As a Kyoshi warrior, is she a little more tolerant of women, or open to the idea of a MFF with Sokka and Ty Lee? Would Ty Lee be? Is that even going to happen? Heehee, I know Mai and Zuko's obvious end...but still wonder how much she'll let him off the hook after the obvious way to escape the soldiers' attention...)

    Too many questions - need more story! =)

    Fate

    PS - I noticed that you only allowed "Signed In" reviews - you might want to take that off in your author profile so that unsigned/anonymous reviews can be left. Usually I'm too lazy to sign in myself, but this little fic deserved it. =3
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