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Reviews for Taming A Slave

By : johnrie18
  • From bobdel on August 21, 2007
    I thought for a first chapter it wasn't bad as there has always been something between Ron and Kim which is usually only Kim's way as in most things she has to be on top of every situation. With Ron's bad side as Zorpox Kim is now he one with little or no control over her Destiny unless something happens to change that.

    Also with Kim not being able to fight her own emotions Zorpox might be able to break Kim Possible without any device to bend her will

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  • From Bonniefan on August 21, 2007
    You know... completely ignore my first comment over at FF.net, looks like you already did (they really need to look at putting author alerts in for this site lol).

    Knowing you're putting it, you can really cut loose, and I am looking forward to that quite a bit.

    Eagerly awaiting more!
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