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Reviews for Slave of Egypt

By : Nathalia
  • From ANON - Reih on September 20, 2007
    A very sexy story. It's also very dark and forbidding. I think that we were all wondering what would/could have happened if she hadn't gotten away that night. Good job! ^^
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  • From ANON - vera on August 13, 2007
    okay, so iknow this is rather late, but i just read the story. it's interesting. pleez continue!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2007
    Great story are you going to finish it.
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  • From UltimateFucker on July 06, 2007
    Very interesting AU, please add more soon
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  • From ANON - John on June 07, 2007
    Very interesting story, very descriptive and well written, I look forward to see how the slave girl escapes...if she does...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2007
    Excellent.
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  • From ANON - notrelevant on May 07, 2007
    Its good so far, keep going!
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  • From skeeve on April 29, 2007
    This story has an interesting start. The "what if" idea has a firm foundation in todays fiction, and is one that I like to pursue myself in my musings. It will be interesting to see where you take this story. Will this be exclusively an erotic story or will you explore the ramification of the prince's decisions for the future?
    Honestly if you want to see this story become more widely reviewed you might want to expand on the characters a little more.
    Good luck with the rest of the story, I look forward to seeing where you take it.
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