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By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Alex on July 10, 2009
    Hey i'd be more than happy to beta Slow Heat for you ^_^ noooo problemo ^_^
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  • From ANON - Alex on July 10, 2009
    WOOO!!! That IS drama! lol my favorite line has to be:
    I quickly shit another fireball at the ground in front of him.

    LMAO AANG SHIT OUT A FIREBALL IN FRONT OF ZUKO?! LMAO I couldnt help but get a mental picture of that lol. Man this story is great keep it up. I'm glad you got hit with inspiration..please finish asap! The sooner you finish slow heat the sooner I'll finish reading it lol
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  • From classiccowboy on July 09, 2009
    You know. It's really wierd that I like this. Being that I actually am a Kataang shipper, and dispite it being not my choice of pairing you have a wonderfully written story with all the characters spot on. It's playing out exactly as I imagined it would have if they had sent Kat after Zuko instead of Aang.

    Though I am still worried about Aang's survival chances here ... though without Katara, what with his depression at being the odd man out this time, I'd not be surprised if Aang took a suicide shot at Ozai this time instead of the passifist, shorter, bold version of Super Saiyan Son Goku. proceeded by a line to Kat, Zuko, and the Gang of "what else have I got to live for now?" after all, his people's dead, everyone else is pretty much set where they are without him, once Ozai's gone, in his eyes what else is there going to be to come back to.

    but, that's just my muses getting away from me, you've written a great story so far, looking forward to seeing how you wrap it up


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  • From ANON - cookie on July 09, 2009
    this was a great chapter
    I enjoyed the action

    keep it up :D
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 09, 2009
    I'm pretty open minded when it comes to shipping, and I usually hold good porn and good writing over any opinion I may have on the author's views about a series. I can see that you've put a lot of work into this and I respect that.

    But that's bullshit and you know it, Aang would have totally been able to beat Zuko at this point in the show.
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  • From ANON - Quiet Reviewer on July 09, 2009
    "His balls were clenched in tight fists atop his knees" Best.Line.Ever XDD Oh the Drama indeed!!!!
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  • From ANON - Melonmanga on July 08, 2009
    Spleff-sama this was great chpter and in the end an-chan victory(at least he thinks it)i could see him in front off me
    L-O-V-E spleff-sama stories
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on July 07, 2009
    Ah, I've been away from the Avatar stuff for awhile. But, here I read this and I remember what makes the fandom so awesome. I really like how you've drawn out the Zuko/Katara/Aang triangle - with all the awkwardness entailed as Zuko and Katara try to keep their relationship on the hush. On thing I am curious about though would be Sokka's take. Granted Sokka is just about the biggest picture of obliviousness that there is, but you'd think especially as so many other people have put two and two together at this point that Sokka's intelligent enough to figure out when something's going on with his sister.

    Excellently done overall! I look forward to the upcoming battle!
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  • From ANON - jackie23 on July 06, 2009
    Just love, love, love it!! This chapter was soo intense, I just loved how intimate they are together. Poor little Aang, how blind can he be? Please update very soon!
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  • From ANON - linz on July 05, 2009
    hey!

    i know you haven't gotten a review from me before, but i have been diligently following this story, and i love it!
    just thought i'd let you know. i know how frustrating it is to see lots of hits and no reviews, so i thought i'd send you some love for your story, all of them actually they are all very well written...and hot. :)
    keep pushing through those long hours of writing! it's always worth it.

    lindsay
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  • From ANON - Alex on July 02, 2009
    I HATE YOU AANG!! LEAVE THEM ALONE!!! lmao aw man...so smutty...so...beautiful lol...I wish this happened in the real show, well obviously the smut wouldnt...it's Nick lol but still :'( aw man.... I didn't know this story existed, my friend told me about kiss of Fire and I am soooo loving that and I decided to check out what else you have and stumbled upon this.... muy bueno i must say... my only problem is that whoever checks ur stories misses out on sum typos...i mean they're simple little errors like out instead our and stuff like that but I mean if u have ppl checking ur stories for that then.... no offense but theyre slacking lol idk, typos kind of annoy me, but ur stories are so good that i can ignore them with ease :-D PLZ KEEP UPDATING BEFORE I DIE WAITING!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH for both stories :-D of course
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  • From ANON - pooper on July 01, 2009
    I loved the latest chapter.
    Keep it up. I'm looking forward to your updates.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on July 01, 2009
    NNNNIIIICCEEEE! Yummy I loved this very smexy hawt chapter. Thank you for sending me off to the anime fest in LA this weekend with such yummy images. I'm luving every second of this story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2009
    Hey, I'm really enjoying this story so far. But do you really have to torture Aang for so long? Just have Katara tell him he doesn't want him already. He'll get over it. If she's with Zuko then there shouldn't be any reason for her to hold back an answer like in the show. And it would probably be in character to expect him to get very angry at both Zuko and Katara, and maybe attack Zuko.

    Maybe that could be the reason why Aang leaves during the finale in this version?

    Just a suggestion.
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  • From ANON - Quiet Reviewer on June 30, 2009
    Such a wonderful chapter!
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