Reviews for One Crazy Spring in Dimmsdale

BY : Tomcat

  • From fatal_jmj on February 25, 2018

    Just got done reading this and I can't wait for the next chapter. I had a sinking feeling when I got to the part where Timmy was waiting for Veronica to message him and was hoping I was wronge, but when I found out my suspicions were right my stomic dropped and I started to tear up (though I'm hoping some how she wasn't really on the plane, as unlikely as it is to happen). As I'm writing this review, I feel like I'm sick from the upsetting ending of the last chapter, I've had plenty of stories in the past where I've gotten so into them that they've made me bawle like a baby at really sad parts, but I've never had felt sick to my stomic from a story like this has from pure heart ache and that shows just how good of a writer you are and how much this story has touched me. Hope you keep this story going and update soon.

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  • From InfiniteKuinshi on February 06, 2017

    SniperTomCat I just wanna say that I love this story and every chapter, it is just great and amazing keep up the good work :)

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  • From ANON - redred3 on November 22, 2016

    i don't know if you would take up on these, but this is what i think on how Mr. and Mrs. Turner finally learn the truth about who Vicky truly is.they are sitting at the reastrant in the city waiting for their orders to arrive as they talk about their sons problems the last couple of weeks, to the point of when they put Vicky into the conversation and on how she would help him with his troubles. however, at a nearby table, a woman their age hears what they said about Vicky and came up to them asking if what they said was true. when she heard what she was hopping wasn't true, she tells them everything about what Vicky has done to her own son and, dispite him telling her what she did, would not listen to him on everything the so called babysitter did. untill one day, she found him at night in the bathtub soked in blood with a note on why he did that. that's when she finally learns how horrible that teenager is and called 9-1-1 as quick as she could to take her son for medical help. he manage to servive, but unfortinatly the damage was too much and he's still in the hosppitle in a coma, witch caused the woman to burst into tears in sadness and shame for her son and what he's ben put through. after hearing all of that, the Turner parents finally puts together the things Timmy has told them and compleatly understans what he's ben trying to tell them. but when realisation struck them, they rush out the restraunt in order to get their son out of Vicky's hands at her home before it could be too late.this is only a sujestion as i'm getting tired of there cluelessness about Vicky as that could be their wake up call. i don't know how much you have with the next chapter, but at least keep this in mined in the furture for this fic.

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  • From helljose on June 15, 2016

    incredible XD i love your history - ,mmm txv interesing

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  • From ANON - Hans Gustavson on May 27, 2016

    After wwoec died I thought that this story wouldn't be continued. But to my lovely surprise, i saw the new chapter 31 yester and I'm really torn...

    It was nice too see, that the tides had turned and now Trixie "chases" Timmy... after watching the serie all the years, that change was good to read :)

    The part with Veronica was my absolutige favourite about that chapter... to see Timmy and Veronica together melts my heart. After fullfilling the wish with the garden... awesome... I wonder about that twist with the the tickets... I think that Timmy is right, when he thinks that something is wrong. Maybe this the revenge/idea (or a part of it) from Chad and Tad --> to seperate them again... after they got fresh back together... Time will tell about that twist...

    Now the part which I don't like: The complete sex scene... it is indeed well written after all (thats not the prob). But I'm not a fan of Bondage and "forced". But the main point is about breaking his promise (which you wrote nice at the end of the chapter). I screamed and hoped Timmy will stop before the main act happen... but now it has happened. Hope it will goes well with him and his guilty... he had suffered so much in the past...
    That's my main point that his resistance fall after the lustful "attacks" of the sister duo... I must admit that I don't liked how he gived in..

    But overall it was a pleasure to read and really looking forward what you have planned for your story..

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  • From Jackal on May 22, 2016

    Great chapter, hope there'll be more Vicky sex in the future. I'm aware of how that'll fuck Timmy up but of all the girls he's screwed her scenes were my favorite.

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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 16, 2016

    Wow how will timmy be able to deal with his broken promise to roni and how will he be able to deal with the other problems that are starting to show will he be able to control himself or has vicky unleash a new monster in timmy hope to see more love your new update keep them coming

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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on May 15, 2016

    Another splendid chapter. Well Tootie pretty much gone off the deep end. She's also lost any real chance she had of being Timmy's friend, much less his girlfriend. Poor Timmy how will he recover from this.

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  • From ANON - pokemon fan on May 13, 2016

    I REALLY think his parents should find out about the torcher that Vicky has put him through. Timmy's ben going through enoghf already with what's going on this entire spring.

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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on December 23, 2015

    Awesome work as always.

    I wonder what Celestia knows.

    I look forward to seeing how Timmy's encounter with Trixie will turn out.

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  • From ANON - The Book of Eli on December 13, 2015

    Oh man I really like this story. Please keep updating I love the shipping between Timmy and veronica...

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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on September 20, 2015

    Another spectacular story. Really happy to this story still going so strong. Even after all this time.

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  • From ANON - The Book of Eli on September 07, 2015

    Please make more chapters this story is soooo good. I want to see the ups and downs in store for Timmy. And all the other characters fitting in in their own way. Please write more even its a bi monthly update kind of thing. But please write more please...

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  • From ANON - Jordan on July 09, 2015

    I loved this story so much I never thought I could find so much enjoyment from a single story and I wish it would of had a true end not just unfinished I truly wish the author could continue this awesome story I could come up with so many Different chapters it's unreal thanks for the story

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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on June 06, 2015

    Another awesome chapter.

    Loving the romance between Veronica and Timmy. Will her father come around?

    Tootie is really losing it.

    It really seems like Remy is planning something big.

    One thing i'm enjoying about this story is the crossovers. I'm guessing we haven't seen the last of the MLP crossover. After all i'm pretty sure Twilight will try her best to find out who stole her book, and hurt her owl.

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