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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

By : Spleef
  • From soulbender on February 24, 2008
    lol this is getting funny. but i do have a question will toph ever get the idea that something is not right about zukos wife miumi. that may be she is so similar to katara or so.
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  • From inuficcrzy on February 23, 2008
    a beautifully thought out story, i love it!! i can't wait to see more!!
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  • From WildWestSamurai on February 22, 2008
    Alright, I'm a new reader to this (read all 29 chapters in next to 6 hours total) & I have only good things to say. The thought of a reincarnated Katara or however you're playing this is interesting, I must say. The intricate level of detail & professionalism in your writing is impressive; ever considered writing as a possible career? (lol I'm kidding, but it does suit you)

    The relationships between the three main characters are very well layered & true to the show as well as your own imagination's workings. The tense buildup of Zuko's/Miumi's relationship was rocky but it flowed magnificently, accurate to the true nature of real relationships, especially such an abrupt one as theirs. Kuzon is... okay, he's adorable. What can I say? lol

    I love the research & amount of historical-comparative detail you put into this (I myself am a history nut too & was practically cheering upon reading your two recent notes on the concubinage system & Asian names. Yay! A fellow history nerd!)

    Anywho... >.> the recent arc with the abduction was exciting & I truly look forward to Enki getting his comeuppance, maybe in the form of public castration (lol Just kidding, again.). Miumi(Katara)'s water-whipping was well-served. Toph was perfectly characterized as an adult (Gotta love her. ^_^). And, um... yeah, I can't think of anything to say anymore.

    Overall, the story flows well, it's original, it's wonderfully written, &, um... I look forward to more. *holds up Ebert & Roper's severed hands & points the thumbs up* lol
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  • From ANON - Sayle on February 22, 2008
    I'm sure I must have mentioned how much I love this story last time...but I will repeat myself. Not only has it an innovative storyline it has characters that make you want to reach through the screen and throttle them. That really isn't anything special. When you want to do it because they hurt another character...well, you are certainly doing something right! Keep up the great work!
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  • From DarkRoseofChaos on February 21, 2008
    Another good chapter from you! I hope Enki gets it good.... >.< I can just immagen a cute little midget toph...thats shorter and more midgety than the current toph. I wonder who the daddy was....possibly an arranged thing of some sort? Or maybe he died D:

    But anywho, another good chapter fom you and I hope you update any of your wonderfull stories soon!!
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  • From ANON - kubot on February 21, 2008
    yay! another great chapter, i love reading your work and eagerly await more :)
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on February 20, 2008
    EEEE! It's been so long! I've missed this story! Gosh, I hope the summit goes okay, tho' knowing plotlines and history it could turn very ugly, very fast. Thank's for sharing that research at the begining! Coolness.
    History *is* awesome. It's one twisted, messed up story that will never end, so long as there is someone to remeber it or record it.
    So glad to see you updating! :)
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  • From ANON - Anony. on February 20, 2008
    Good chapter as always! the Dai Li thing was pretty interesting; i like the historical facts. Great job!
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  • From AdamIam on February 20, 2008
    This story is really starting to grow on me. I am very happy to see an update and cannot wait for more. Walkingpapers
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  • From ANON - ZarakiKenRoby on February 15, 2008
    Brilliant, Magnifico, Stupendous, the BEST chapter you have written as of yet. I love the conflict that arouse in this chapter, the end result and resolve. That bastard Enki got what he deserved, and I hope he burns for all eternity for sins against the Fire Nation and its Royal Family. Miumi finally confesses her love and accepts her place at Zuko’ s side. I must say that was you wrote a very beautiful ending, a family of three resting on a comfortable after a very weary event of epic proportions. To be honest I WAS VERY SURPRISED! AND I MEAN REALLY SURPRISED that Zuko didn’t kick Kuzon’s tail out his bed so he could have Miumi/Katara for himself. I dead serious bey. But it is nice to see Zuko grow and mature as a father and husband, and learn how to share his wife with his son. That was magically son.

    As great as this chapter was I gotta ask you where does the story go from here now? Will Katara’s memories ever truly awaken inside Miumi, and if so will Katara be in control of her new body and life or will Miumi simply live a content life with her awaken memories? That is serious food for thought will Zuko love the Katara of past or the Miumi of present? Will Zuko ever reveal the relationship between the two of them and if so will Miumi still love him? What roles do the Avatar and Blind Bandit have to play in this epic fic know as KISS OF FIRE? Who was the snitch/hater that set up the tea party trap, Miharaki, lady Hau, Mara? I by no means write these things as suggestions, I don’t want to impose on your writing, its just that’s how exciting and captivating this story is man. Seriously you have a true gift and passion for writing. So my only request of you Spleefmistress is this, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE ANY STONE UNTURNED IN THIS EPIC MASTERPIECE OF FAN FICTION. PLEASE ANSWER ANY AND ALL QUESTIONS THAT YOU HAVE CREATED IN THIS PIECE.

    Thanks for reading, peace out, take care, stay alive and may GOD be with you for the rest of your days.

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  • From zenia on January 21, 2008
    Amazing story so far. I am surprised that more people haven't said anything. I am so wrapped up in it already and when I went to click on 'next chapter'... there wasn't one. Doh. XDD I suppose I *have* to go to bed now. lol Good job, I can't wait till the next bit is out!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2008
    another great chapter completed thnkx u da best
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  • From DarkRoseofChaos on January 16, 2008
    :D How cute!!! I am so happy that Katara beat the shit out of enki! That stupid bastard, not thinking things through. I am so happy that Katara finaly told Zuko that she loves him to! So many things to be happy about in this chapter ^-^ I hope that you update this and other works soon because I always love to read your stories!
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  • From ANON - Corsetx on January 16, 2008
    I loved the author's note all most as much as I loved the story : ) The Enki ass beating was wicked as well loved every word of the story Spleef!
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  • From ANON - CoffeeGyrl on January 16, 2008
    Awww very sweet. This chapter had all the great elements, battle, triumph, revenge and love. I esspically liked the water bending and the frozen punshment. This was great and very sweet, I'm looking forward to Zuko's wrath. I really enjoyed your author's note it was very nice.
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