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Reviews for Kiss of Fire

By : Spleef
  • From BahamutZero on August 29, 2009
    First I just wanted to say that I actually read all of your Slow Heat story first but haven't gotten around to reviewing that one yet so I'll keep this about Kiss of Fire. Put simply, your story is amazing. Plot and character development go smoothly and steadily. I never had any feeling that you were rushing the story to get to a certain point or just threw in random characters in the mix to just forget about them later. Your original character are well-rounded from your descriptions and conversations involving them. My favorite part of this story so far was when Enki kidnapped Katara and Kuzon along with the resulting trials. I think this is mostly due to seeing the familiar faces of Toph and Suki during the trials. I just liked how you introduced them and only later provided information as to what had happened to them after the war. Toph and Zuko having a child was a nice touch that I had not expected. A concept of yours that I found enjoyable because of its realistic view would be that the war didn't just suddenly stop and everyone was happy. Old grudges are hard to let go and if people have been fighting in a war for that long I think it is safe to say that quite a few would have problems stopping. A lot of fics I have seen that take place after the war either have an instant peace worldwide (how believable is that honestly) or just never talk about it as they skip quite a few years (it kind of leaves you to make a decision yourself with whether there had been more fighting afterward or not). Now there were parts where I was quite confused at times but you always seemed to clear these up within a chapter or two so I assume it was by design. If I had to pick a least favorite arch of the story it would probably be the fighting for affection Zuko had going on with his son. It wasn't that this was badly written or that the plot was off or anything, I just felt that some of Zuko's actions were a bit over the top. While I can actually understand that he wanted Katara to himself (especially since it was just a short time after he had found her again) I just feel that some of his actions he wouldn't allow himself to do because of his love for Katara. I think I know where you are going with the story (or at least where Katara is heading) now and I must admit that I am curious to see what happens. I assume she is going to talk to Aang and see if it was actually him that intervened somehow when she died or maybe just see if he can find out for sure how she was reincarnated through his touch with the spirit world. I have no idea how he or Sokka will react upon seeing the reincarnated Katara but it will be interesting to see if Aang tries to take her away from Zuko (and both Zuko and Katara's reaction if he tries). Just to let you know that if you want to send me anything in response I am not sure if my e-mail is shown or not but if nothing else I am also on fanfiction.net under the name crossxavier. Well I really enjoyed your story and I look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 21, 2009
    Oh and btw coffee gyrl...Azula died from the injuries she sustained when she fought Zuko....So why would you even mention that? That's so stupid. If anything I would guess that she's out to visit Aang...The Avatar (Bridge between human n spirit world) so she can find the answer that both her and Zuko don't know...which could be: How DID Katara get reincarnated? Popular belief states only the Avatar can do so...Hence maybe the Avatar can answer this question....Duh....That's just my guess though lol but Azula as suggestion was just plain dumb...so dumb that I had to mention it....SPLEEF YOU RULE!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 21, 2009
    Oh and I sooooooo agree with Fo Qua over there.....except for the whole skipping sex scenes thing lmao but besides that i so agree and capture the maiden was soooooooooooooo friggin kool/good/i loved it/i love it....idk how to describe it lol ur stories...they just pwn man
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 21, 2009
    IM OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY!!! Man...ITS ABOUT TIME!! Now we're getting somewhere! OH YEAH! I'm sooo loving this...oh man..what unanswered question..AND AANG!!! SWEET LITTLE INNOCENT AANG!!!! LMAO WITH A HAREM?!!! UNBELEIVABLE!! LMAO I always wondered about that....if he was an air bender and had kids wouldn't there be a possibility of one of them being an air bender as well? lol He's like the Noah of air benders LMAO!!! keep it up n update always :-D I LOOOOOVE THIS!!!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on August 21, 2009
    Hmmmm lemme guess Azula's getting a visitor, I can't wait to see her. I love, love, love the adult backstory you've given them with Aang no longer being the only airbender and Zuko and Toph. It adds such a richness and depth to the story.
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  • From ANON - Max on July 30, 2009
    This is a INCREDIBLE story! It's all so dramatic and sensual and gahhh! :D Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2009
    Finally! Is Zuko going to finally tell her what is really going on?
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  • From ANON - Kate on July 23, 2009
    Update soon i just found your works and i love them. I worked quite a few days to get this one this far and i'd love to read on post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Fo Qua on July 22, 2009
    Dearest Spleefmistress,

    You, my dear, and a genious. I have read many fan fiction in my day. And I mean, MANY, but none as well written, and near flawless as this. Your other stories are marvelous, but this is by far my most favorite.
    You see, I find plot driven Fan Fiction to be much more impressive. Anyone with a computer and a basic concept of sex (aka: Penis goes in vagina = sex) thinks they can write one of these. That is a lie. That is bull shit. That is crap. One page stories with six lines of dialogue, two paragraphs of hardcore fucking, and one closing sentence does not make a story. I can honestly see removing the sexual aspects of this story, adding to the beginning, making a different sort of transition from ATLB to this story line, and putting it one the air. I think it would be simply fabulous. You've truly studied your characters, you've explored them in ways I've never seen in a fan fiction. Not to mention your particular research on the culture, and careful naming of characters to match their personality, it was like read a soap opera, only I like it. (I detest soap operas, too much bull shit) I simply could not stop reading it. I've been captivated by your story, even going so far as to SKIP the sexual scenes when the plot thickened. It just seemed so plausible. Except for Toph and Zuko making a baby, but only because I can't see Toph having children. I would be more than willing to purchase and read anything you may publish, and be a dedicated fan girl for as long as you write. And I would LOVE to chat via e-mail.
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  • From eoNbluesaturNalia on July 14, 2009
    excellent!!! fantabulous! i loved it, and can't find a thing to critique!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2009
    ahahaha oh my god
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  • From ANON - Alex on July 14, 2009
    OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGG NOOOOOOOOOOOOO I FORGOT SHE WAS CARRYING THAT PACKAGE!!!!! THAT'S SOOO HORRIBLE!!!! ZUKO U SHOULD FEEL LIKE SHIT!!!! i find it hilarious how he was trying to throw her off by trying to be seductive lmao ooooooh man now wat zuko? NOW WAT!! lmao thats sooo sad n horrible i cant believe she lost the baby :'( i wanted to cry lmao
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  • From ANON - ZarakikenRoby on July 13, 2009
    WHY MAN! WHY!

    DAT BABY AIN"T DO NOBODY NOTHING MAN!

    WHY DID U BUILD UP SO MUCH HAPPINESS ONLY TAKE IT AWAY MAN! WHY!

    WASN'T THE HELL WITH ENKI ENOUGH MAN!

    WHY!

    I WANNA SEE HOW U GA RESOLVE THEIR PROBLEMS NA!

    MAN!
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  • From ANON - LinaStar on July 13, 2009
    Wow! Another exciting chapter! Aw, but I wanted Katara to have the baby... Poor Zuko. Katara's gonna kill him when she wakes up. Please continue the story. I always look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Quiet Reviewer on July 13, 2009
    This chapter made me tear up a bit, very angsty. Too bad about the baby D: Excellent job
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