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By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Anna on August 01, 2006
    Need a new chapter...
    or i will fall into.. a death position...
    .. I NEED A NEW CHAPTER!!! ;____;
    Pleaaaaaase release me!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - CoolBlue on July 14, 2006
    You truly amaze me. You write such wonderful stories and this story has to be my favorite. I love the fact you review quickly. Though Hot Water was excellent, I kind of wish you had put this side in the story. I had really thought Katara was going to leave instead of staying. But don't stop writing and don't stop updating this story.

    Later
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  • From ANON - ? on July 05, 2006
    they were talking too much
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 25, 2006
    The sex scene blew my mind and...oh noes, it's Aang!
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  • From ANON - Lindy on June 24, 2006
    First of all, fishies! Second, the Aang twist was unexpected, I thought it would be an assassin. Third, I think it's really creative how you can make an AU of your own fanfic. It's pretty well-written, too. Hooray for you!
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  • From ANON - Domluvr on June 21, 2006
    This is fantastic stuff! I love your style!
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  • From ANON - Miss Belle on June 17, 2006
    You know, I do believe that that was the best Zutara sex scene that I have ever seen ANYWHERE.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2006
    Hot, hot, hot, hot, hot!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2006
    they're making up now? YAY
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 13, 2006
    Hi there again... well, where to begin. I'm very much a fan of hot water and your other stories, but this alternate timeline doesn't set well with me. I think it is mostly because Katara seems so helpless, and the avatar too for that matter. I think he would probably have fought to the death rathar than allow Katara to fall back into Zuko's hands, given the limited information he had. Zuko also seems too hard, ruthless and cruel here. I would think that he has too much personal honor to take someone against her wishes, especially after she purposefully left him in the first place. To me, a few years of reflection on how he had initially treated her - as a possession - should have made him consider a while before repeating the same mistakes that he made initially. If you had played that scenario out different, perhaps by having Zuko 'ask' instead of 'take', I think it would have made for a fantastic story, with plenty of angst for all to share without taking anyone too far out of character. As it is, you have three characters who, to me, aren't acting at all like one would expect them to. I hope you don't take this the wrong way - it's just one reader's opinion after all.
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  • From ANON - Vicki So on February 03, 2006
    Nice chapter! I find myself constantly laughing at how chauvanistic Zuko is, and just how stubborn he is about owning Katara. Because I suppose that's how real male chauvanists think, and it blows my mind.
    Aang's own possessiveness is a nice turn on things too. It says a lot about Katara's personality too - maybe she really likes being taken care of, but won't admit it. She's as stubborn as Zuko some days. 8 )
    Can't wait for the next.

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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on February 03, 2006
    *gasp* Another chapter! Wow your really movin'!!!! This is so great!!! I can't wait to read more!!!!
    ~Guen~
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on February 02, 2006
    Zutara sweetness! I'm glad Zuko got it together. Yeah, Aang may be a sweetheart but in this story he's...just as possessive as Zuko but not as trusting of Katara's abilities, though neither of them seem to listen too well...>sigh< I was SOOOOOOOOOO happy to see that you'd updated! Out of curiosity...if/when Zuko and Katara get to Sozun will Zuko have to formally "marry" Katara? Or otherwise say "Hey! This's my wife! So THERE!" to the court? YAY for happy snugglyness! Can't wait to find out what will happen next! Excellent job! ^-^
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  • From ANON - fir123 on February 02, 2006
    dannng you wrte good i hope you can write more on this story
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 02, 2006
    Hi there, it's me again. This chapter is pretty interesting. It sounds like Aang was being a little overprotective with Katara, and those events from Sozen probably traumatize him for life. I do hope that Katara will be okay and that she and Zuko will find a way to make them both happy. Anyway good luck with Hot Water, see you real soon.
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