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Reviews for Volcano

By : Spleef
  • From io on June 30, 2019

    BUT BUT BUT BUT BUT!!!!

     

    I HAVEN'T FINISHED THE SECOND PART!!!! PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE YOUR WRITING, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND THIS WAS A GREAT STORY! Please don't leave me wondering what's gonna happen! I need to know! Please post it back, at least for a couple of weeks, just so I can finish Hot Water and Volcano!


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  • From IrisMiko on March 06, 2015
    This was a really good story. Though I like the ending of the series, I also enjoy the ending in "Hot Water". I do wish, however, that in the end of this book you would have mentioned something about their children. Nevertheless, there is much in this story that would have been a very good addition to "Hot Water". You have alot of skill. I wish I had had that but I'm still far from your level.
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  • From Pat4pat on February 12, 2013
    I actually prefer this ending a lot better. The chase and hunt is all so sexy. :)
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  • From Scorpia on December 15, 2010
    I think you did a wonderful job!
    I have enjoyed everthing you have written and I think this is the best ending you have made.
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  • From ANON - kitty on September 03, 2010
    I've always loved this trilogy, but I'm even more impressed with the revisions and additions. This newer version is definitely awesome. I can't wait until it's complete! :D
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  • From ANON - DJ on August 30, 2010
    Yummy yummy yummy!

    I'm glad I read it. It was hot and delicious and I'm glad you got inspired ^^ Nothing better than yummy Zutara smut on a icky icky day.

    I like the water suits. Katara's climax oddly suited her. Seeing as you always have Zuko breath fire as he orgasms and Katara to make a big splash as she released oddly suited her.

    Now, that's got me wondering...since waterbending is linked to one's emotions...did a waterbender's house mysterious cave in while he/she is having sex?
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  • From ANON - savvyvyvyan on July 26, 2010
    ba hahahaahhahahahahaahaaaa

    when ever zuko roars out fire as he comes it just makes me laugh so loudly

    i just love the way the whole crew of the ship would have been able to hear that entire episode...
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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 25, 2010
    likening their fight to a spinning coin was a graceful use of metaphorical imagery
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  • From ANON - savvy vy on July 25, 2010
    “I am doing nothing wrong to her, that point aside it is none of your business what I do, the Fire Nation does not recognize you as any kind of authority!”

    and by firenation he means himself

    i love this story so much but i am never going to get this reread done there seems to be something worthy of reviewing every few sentences


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  • From ANON - savvyvyvyan on July 25, 2010
    man i love your zuko
    i love that he is so petty that he orders the guards to "confiscate any personal belongings" despite it being obvious that neither aang or katara own very much.

    i love that he just busts in to the inn and takes her not caring how desperate/cruel he looks

    i guess being the fire lord means he can do what he wants and no one will judge him

    i suppose that is obvious really still, the thought of the fire lord of an entire nation being so overbearingly harsh and cruel toward a 15 year old (even if he is the avatar he is still a gentle and the way you write him not very powerful being)

    i'm not sure how i feel about the "i'll save you from the avatar" comment
    yeah i get the whole symmetry thing and yes it does ad to the petty/self-righteous character of your zuzu... upon second thoughts i love that line.

    once again... yay for this story


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  • From ANON - savvy vyvyan on July 25, 2010
    eachpeach thinks that the soldiers trampling mud onto the bedding is a nice, symbolic touch.
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  • From ANON - Cherry C on July 03, 2010
    This is a great chapter and the sex and light bondage was intensely hot. My only critique is that I notice in your stories you always have Zuko and Katara 'nodding' a lot. It's weird, cuz I'm always picturing bobble-heads when I'm reading your stories to the point where it's kinda distracting. Other than that, I really enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Chibinelly on June 28, 2010
    Read the smutt. Loved it as always. Update soon please !
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 27, 2010
    That was an awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Chibinelly on May 05, 2010
    oh Tara and Zuko why do you both have to be so stubborn? These two characters are the most stubborn ones i've read from every fanfic. When I read this I cant help being angry with Aang. Sure he looked after Katara but he cant make her happy like Zuko does. He's so childish and clingy. Even in the anime. That's why there are so many Zutara fans out there because Zuko and Katara share a much more mature and romantic relationship. It has more depth
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