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Reviews for My Life as a Teenaged Von Neumann Device

By : Toonspew
  • From pbow320 on June 02, 2011
    I was wondering if you're going to continue this story. I've read chapter 20 over at wwoec and you've left it wide open for a few years now. It's s great story and deserves to be continued.
    If you aren't going to continue this story, I understand. Real life sometimes leads us on a different path.
    Best Wishes
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  • From roseredautumn on December 04, 2009
    this is a really intense story, and I think you've done an awesome job with the plot.
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  • From kageryuu on October 02, 2008
    Definately a good read! The story is well written with good holdings to the original characters, and the OC's fit the mix stupendously. I look forward to the next update!
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  • From dasmithjr on March 06, 2008
    I LOVE this story...Are you ever going to finish it? I wish you would.
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  • From ryuukoenko on April 01, 2007
    THis is an awesome story, but will there be a 20th chapter? I'm kind of looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Dragonrider on September 29, 2006
    HOLY SHIT THAT LAST CHAPTER WAS INTENSE!!
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  • From ANON - General nazor on February 05, 2006
    OH MY GOODNESS!!!
    LOVE,HATE,JOY,ANGUISH this one has it all
    (and more;})Heck you could have left some stuff out and it would still be good!
    (p.s. Jenny showed more restrant then i would have!
    first I would'v gotten my butt kicked by thoes cluster guards
    and then when I got that gun I would have busted them in they'r knees!)
    lOTS MORE STUFF SOON PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Dragonrider1227 on February 05, 2006
    The one between Brad and Misty incase you don't know. ;)
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  • From ANON - Dragonrider1227 on February 05, 2006
    MY GOD THAt WAS A HOT SEX SCENE!
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  • From ANON - Dragonrider1227 on January 04, 2006
    Great new chapter. *imagines Jenny with D-cup breasts* Poor Jenny in the whole thing though. Even if it did get Brit beaten up. It was kind of a bitter-sweet victory. *imagines Jenny with D-cup breasts*
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  • From ANON - Estelthephantomdragon on December 11, 2005
    good story, good plot, thought you were gonna do somethin different with brit and tif but oh well, and i knew where that 15% was going, for some reason i'm really good at guessing whats gonna happen next. now remember these are just guesses so. Brad will be okay with jenny leaving him, Brad will be surprised about her having the baby, Tif and Brit will tell the whole school that shes preg and ...... well, i don't know about that part, But in the end i think brit and tiff wil somewho end up dating brad and jen and shell wil get "married" and have the kid and what not. And this story is gonna end on a high note. (basicaly leaveing the readers to decides what happens next, like in most storys.)
    Any way good story hope to see more of your storys get around. You should try and writ a good danny phantom (if you want to and you like DP) because you'd prob do a great job on it like you have this story.
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  • From ANON - Sheba on December 10, 2005
    This story is badass! I LOVE it!
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  • From ANON - Dragonrider1227 on December 01, 2005
    *must...kill...Brit...and...Tiff...* Cool chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - fire neko on October 22, 2005
    Great story!!!! I love the way you kept all the charecters in-charecter which is what some writers dont often do. It really shows that you put alot of work into the plot. The science seems very logical and it was very easy to understand. I think I might have a good idea where that 15% is going... Any plz update soon and keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - WTF? on October 16, 2005
    SHELDON!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!
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