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Reviews for Army of You

By : KoiLungfish
  • From StarscreamXOptimus on January 29, 2008
    OMG I love this story, you captured their characteristics perfectly and it's beautifully written, so poetic that once I started I couldn't stop.

    Now I have a confession to make I read this aug 28th last yr and made a pic for you because I found it so inspiring
    tried to send it to ur email account only to find out it didn't work any more so if u get to read this comment please take a look here :D http://idigoddpairings.deviantart.com/art/Megatron-and-starscream-63592716
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  • From ANON - euphorbic on November 05, 2006
    I've read this and reread this multiple times over the last several months. I've searched out your works on your personal site and in other archives. I'm never disappointed. The files here are largely corrupted, but I've been making do for your flawless Megatron/Starscream dynamic. I could list the shining attributes of your writing for an hour and probably not cover every aspect that has garnered my attention. I firmly admire your forays into highly literate prose. Your use of language, your inventiveness, the attention to detail, the seemingly innate knowledge of cause-and-effect, the unabashed poetic imagery in your writing, not to mention the accuracy of your characterizations; all of this and more mark you as one of the best amateur writers I've come across on the internet. I salute your works and hopefully I can get off my lazy ass and review them properly one day.
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  • From ANON - on November 03, 2006
    Bloody hell!! I love it!!!!
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  • From ANON - (**) on January 19, 2006
    MAAAAGNIFFICENT.
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  • From ANON - Lacerta on January 19, 2006

    Hehehe, me again... I meant to leave my e-mail since I always leave signed reviews (even when 'flaiming'), so, here it is: lacerta3@hotmail.com. Feel free to write me whenever you want. :)
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  • From ANON - Lacerta on January 19, 2006

    I read this a long time ago and felt very very impressed... Years later, I come across it once again and I'm left speechles. Transformer sex is a vey... particulat topic, to say the least. I had wondered how you were going to pull off a fic of this type; there have been many that have tried. And many that have failed. But you did an awsome job here.
    Fans, when writting an erotic/sex transformer fanfic, go and treat the characters as if they were humans and the result is never realistic. Transformers are not human, neither is their biology nor their way of thinking...
    But your fic is different. You've kept the characters completly IN character, you've played with their personalities, and have given to what could have perfectly been a mere porny-fic, a very deep and thought-provoking development.
    You made their 'sex' realistic, and I must congrtulate you for using those latin/greek words instead of more 'human' terms, which, I'm afraid, would clash.
    All in all, this is one of the very best transformer's fanfiction I've evre read and surprinsingly original and well written.
    Awesome job!
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 21, 2005
    Wow, just wow! It is really hard to find good Transformer stories. This one is absolutely breathtaking!--The dialog between the two of them was wonderful. To their touching of each other! Wonderful job on this!
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  • From ANON - heather on July 16, 2005
    sorry for lack of name in my first message. ^^;
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  • From ANON - < 3 on July 16, 2005
    Screw you bryan. For someone to use so many crude curse words not to mention have so many errors in their comment must be stupid. o_o If you hate the story so much, why the hell are you reading it? That just shows how much of a life you have. xD

    My actual review { Lovely story hun. I admire your use of language in this. ^^ Keep at it.
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  • From ANON - Raphael on July 16, 2005
    Lord. xD Half of that I didn't uderstand. Greek and Latin wors? Nice story though. ^^ It's cool to see someone using something new in their stories.
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  • From ANON - Fruitless on May 08, 2005
    Beautiful.
    Your way of writing this piece greatly reminded me of an excerpt from Soul Reaver.
    The relationship between Megatron and Starscream is like that of Kain and Raziel.
    Like I said.
    Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Ghost-of-a-Rose on March 19, 2005
    To find the words to express the raw beauty of this work of art... You have far surpassed any expectations I could have dreamed of having upon reading a story with this pairing. The way they enteract is so true to their character that you can't help but feel their relationship could be no other way. You are drawn in the story, gripped by the pieces of the puzzle falling together and taken to a place one could never have conceived of. But, you have and in so doing, I humbly admit you have proven with this story that you are in the top ranks of writers everywhere.
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  • From ANON - ShinraWeapon on December 17, 2004
    Mmm, they really look good together. The constant battle between them translates to almost sexual tension, which you expressed beautifully. They say that there is a thin line between love and hate, and these two teeter precariously on that line. (Of course, for Megatron and Starscream, the word "hate" seems to translate into "love", or even better, "understanding.") I really liked their conversation between the more...interesting parts, and the last line of dialogue really finished things nicely. In short, great job! I enjoyed your fic very much.
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  • From botticelliangel on December 17, 2004
    Wow. It took me a long time to decide whether i was traumitized or extremely interested in this story. And i have to say it was extremely interesting. I never ever would have thought of that kind of a relationship between screamer and megs. but wow, you really managed to pull it off! Congrats!

    Oh and i shared this with one of my tf fan friends and she says "um....you have destroyed every last vestige of innocence left in our human bodies brought on by cartoon robots" but thats a good thing ^-^.

    Keep writing such awsome work!
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  • From ANON - BoutnyHunterPyro on April 26, 2004
    Like I stated above, this piece has endured an outburst of creativity flowing through it, and you prove to be a wonderful artist as in writing. You show true vision, as you are able to create and design a way that a whole new race has their version of sexual intercourse. If only more people in this would could have the ability to write as well as you. Hell, I wish I could write as well as you!
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