Reviews for Off The Clock

BY : Citizenjess

  • From ANON - Kabato on July 06, 2006

    I liked the story.
    It really took you 12 pages (wow) It takes me lots of pages to get a story together.

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  • From ANON - Dragon on December 19, 2005

    Very nice. No it wasn't too hard to understand who was saying what. I think you did a really good job. Well done.

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  • From ANON - Ryuujin on July 24, 2004

    Very good!! hot!! loved to see how Valmont submits to Dark Jackie! very good story

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  • From ANON - Catchfire on May 28, 2003

    Great writing. Nice and hot. Also a great way to put them together. So what happens when the two halves are put back together? Does Jackie have both sets of memories? I'd like to see this fic continued in that line. Keep up the great work.

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  • From ANON - Ballroom Blitz on May 05, 2003

    that was actually pretty good. the men seemed incharacter enough so that's a point for ya. I hope to see other works by u soon enough

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