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Reviews for The Unforgiven Series

By : Firefly4000
  • From Mandolore on February 11, 2011
    the hate I feel for Barkudo is not as that I have felt before none shall ever come close to the evil barkudo wields and I hope uncle will call upon the demons and also tarakudo and his generals to help save the world from this great evil that has fallen on the world.
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  • From macropixi on January 16, 2011
    this story has great potential, but you constantly use the wrong homonym. Your = Possessive (belonging to You), You're = contraction (You are).
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on August 31, 2005
    Whoa! Great chapter! That was totally awesome! I loved it! Poor Bai Tsa and Dai Gui. Poor Hsi Wu and Jade too. Don't take so long to update this time. Okay?
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  • From ANON - Chad on August 29, 2005
    Cool chapter and story ^^
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  • From ANON - James on August 25, 2005
    You have to update come on please if not I shall try sky diving without a parrachute if I survive please make more
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  • From ANON - Scythe the blade master on August 25, 2005
    You rock out loud not just for the music but this fic is the bomb do more please I crave more
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 30, 2005
    Scary. Freaky. Creepy. And did I mention...scary? Great chapter. When are you gonna update the rest? I wanna see what happens to Jade and Hsi Wu and the demons and Jackie and the rest. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 30, 2005
    Ooh, scary. I hope Hsi Wu and Jade are okay. We get to see more of the other demons, right? I guess I need to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 20, 2005
    Uh-oh! Busted! Poor Jade and Hsi Wu! I hope things work out for them. Even though I know they will cause you're writing the story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 18, 2005
    Yay! Go Hsi Wu! Way to go you sky demon you! He deserves Jade.

    Drago: *ahem*

    You deserve me, but you can have Jade. Sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 18, 2005
    I feels sorry for Hsi Wu. That must've hurt. HEy, when you were talking about the demons, did you mean Xiao the wind demon, or were you talking about Dai Gui? Just want that cleared up.
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  • From ANON - Dragolover2 on July 18, 2005
    Wow! Awesome! See? I review for you. Drago likes the story so far too.

    Drago: Yeah, but I wish it was me instead of bat boy!

    Oh get over yourself. At least you got me.

    Drago: True.

    Keep up the good work, Firefly! *blows you a kiss AS A FRIEND, just so everyone knows and no one tries to kill me* See ya!
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  • From ANON - firelord on March 23, 2005
    Spleef is riht put up chapter 7 all ready this is a great story so update it i mean cheas isant 5 months along an uff whait for Spleef. great story.
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