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Reviews for Loyal-Heart Babysits

By : ebonstarr
  • From supernova222 on May 07, 2012
    holy crap, that was good, disturbing but hot, which is what the paeople on this sight are looking for, :)

    give a new chapter, cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - slafjsal on September 30, 2006
    i want more. ;-;
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  • From ANON - winraven on June 20, 2006
    this is a very good lemon you should continue writing it mybe even make one about there adventures after they get home

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  • From ANON - c on February 04, 2005
    why'd it just stop? I want to read more. Please
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  • From ANON - Dealer of Death on January 23, 2005
    Pretty good for the first bit but I hope it gets more graphic.Oh,a few spelling errors here and there.
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  • From ANON - lbjb on January 02, 2005
    I'm going to try and be constructive, one thing I would say is that the sex acts would actually hurt a lot and may be traumatising to children, but that's the only constructive thing I can say, as I find the concept to be sick. Though one thing, there has been a story incredibly like this, the only difference was it was Brightheart babysitting instead. Perhaps you should try to seek out that story, and if you are going to indulge in writing this sick act, at least try to make it a bit more unique. I know that I'm an adult and it was my choice to read this far into the story, which is why I will not read any further, as I can't bear (pun intended) to see what is going to happen. I can only hope this is the only adult/child fic you would do.
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  • From ANON - g on December 29, 2004
    dat was da hot update soon lol
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on December 05, 2004
    I'm intrigued by the way this story os unfolding and my cupid Laos Black approves of it
    *Laos grins and gives a big thumbs up*

    Even so, I am looking forward to what's going to happen in the next chapter.
    As your Princess, I COMMAND you to continue the story!!!
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  • From AJAngelique on December 05, 2004
    Holely hell in a hand basket...seriously, its full of holes.
    Personally, I never would have thought of that...or anything Care Bears in that matter.

    You've peaked my curiosity and I look forward to the next chapter!
    *grabs author's shirt and shakes them violently* POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!
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