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Reviews for Inevitable

By : GhostHelwig
  • From SaikyoKami on August 14, 2008
    Quiet the life destroying effects nonconcentual-sex will have on a person.Your story has expanded my mind to the passion shared by those in the role of victims.
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  • From Skull on November 12, 2007
    I am proud of another great writer!

    I only give this personal honor to the writers that can shape a story into an emotional recovery and can make me shed my Neutral shell and give sadness. This is also a good fic thanks to the fact that Edd was the Narrator I only read these stories like Gone on the Fourth of July if you have not read it yet you should if it can bring me emotion it's good by my count.

    Skull J. Darkmaster-"If you can break down the shell of a man and make him flow with emotion you have created a miricale"~Quote written By Skull J. Darkamster
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  • From lilvior on November 05, 2005
    o wow! i'v never read any e,e&e but this was so well written, i like that you chose edd as the pov character, he is the best choice for explaining it. iv often thought in the actual cartoon that they take it too far, but yeesh, that was emotional. well done
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  • From ANON - Sakag on June 10, 2005
    I liked it, but it made me feel really sad. Maybe it's because I'm such an emotional person.
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  • From ANON - GerudoPrincess on March 08, 2005
    I really like this story.
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  • From on December 05, 2004
    Wow.That's really sad.
    I didn't think that girls could rape guys but I guess your right.

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  • From ANON - some weird kid on November 27, 2004
    Pure genious. I loved it. It just inspired me to write one.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 26, 2004
    I wasn't sure I'd write this at first but I guess that by the very fact that I'm typing means I want to.

    The issue of males being stalked, harassed and raped by women is something that, unfortunately, the majority of people are still not taking seriously. This primarily stems from the unacceptable sexist culture society has yet to fully shake off along with false preconceptions about how all males think, the perception often being that practically every strait guy is practically gagging for it the second they hit puberty.

    I was only 10-years old I was sexually assaulted by an 11-year old girl, she didn't go as far to rape me though. She had help from her friends to overcome the difference in strength who held me down for her.

    Anyway, I just wanted to say that I personally found your story to be a pretty accurate reflection of the kind of feelings people go through during experiences like that.

    It's the powerlessness that is the worst thing, to be screaming at the top of your voice and only hear sadistic laughter in return, to realise that in these moments you have been reduced to something less than a human being, to little more than an item of their personal property.

    So again, well done and take pride that you've helped heal a few old scars.
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  • From ANON - Joey on September 26, 2004
    Okay.That was a........a.......POSITIVELY GREAT STORY.I mean that too,or at least you explained it better than some of the other bakas that come here.Keep up the good work.Maybe you can write one just as good as this one,but all and all,you did good kid.
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  • From ANON - DMajorBoss on September 02, 2004
    That was one heck of a story: compelling, sad, powerful, and a few other words that describe it that I can't recall at the moment. You wrote an excellent story that really brings out one's feelings. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - chris on July 20, 2004
    This was a very good story in terms of life. The Eds did alot fo growing u in this stoy and u seemed to capture thier personalitys perfectly.The story was also well written.
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  • From ANON - Mysticlynx on April 16, 2004
    I absolutely loved this fic. It's just so deliciously...tragic. I know you said you are not very good at poetry, but this whole story seemed like you were waxing poetic to I neI nearly cried when Eddy told Ed to be quiet in such a downtrodden manner. I wouldn't be surprised if the Kankers ever did that(not in the toon, of course). Sometimes when I watch the cartoon I get throughly PO'ed at the way they treat the Eds and nobody cares. Anyway, BRILLIANT fic! I cancapicapitalize that enough. Where do you get your ideas? BTW, kinda stupid of me for not knowing my name was on the e-mail, huh?
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