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Reviews for Mind Games

By : Orianna
  • From ANON - LadyKatherine29 on November 23, 2012
    This was a very well put together set of chapters. All three were very well done. Plot very explained and presented in a manor. That the reader could easly pick up. Yet was highly interesting and very intreaging. Flow was good. All three chapters flowed very well. You did a wonderful job with the first three. I really liked how you have writen everyone. Hiss is complex and very interesting. Teela is also very nicely done. I really enjoyed my time spent reading this. I sincerly hope, that you do a couple more chapters for this. Its a great story and I would love to see it finished. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From guzhead on October 19, 2010
    Awesome. Please continue, and have Teela become Hiss' Queen.
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  • From ANON - Karl on July 10, 2005
    Very good work and well reaghten. Don't stop now the story is getting very good more.
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  • From ANON - Wanderer3 on February 06, 2005
    This story has potential...an update would be great. I'll ignore the Hsss parts if you don't mind...personal preference is with Adam/Teela...but that's me....Gotta Blast!
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on November 21, 2004
    I am highly pleased with the way this story is going and can;t wait to see what direction it will take.
    As your Princess, I command you to continue the story!!!!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on November 21, 2004
    This is getting quite interesting.
    Can't wait to see what's going to happen next, keep up the great work!!!
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  • From on July 28, 2004
    Great story, Ori!. I can't
    wait for the next chapter.
    Keep up the talented work!.
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  • From ANON - Tonysbedroomslave on April 08, 2004
    Very well done. I have to say that you have handled the frist two chapters with class and style. Everyone was very believeable and I could see it all very clearly in my mind. You have something really good here and I hope that you keep going with this. I think it's worth your time and effot to do so.
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